The Squirrel and the Chipmunk
Backyard negotiations8 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
If animals can live in harmony why can't adults take a cue from them. With the Hurricanes ravishing everywhere help is needed every where we look.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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If animals can live in harmony why can't adults take a cue from them. With the Hurricanes ravishing everywhere help is needed every where we look.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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Yes, it would be nice, but unfortunately, greed and jealousy in many humans seems to be the main motivating forces. Thanks for your read , review and comment.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
An attractive option for this contest I like both the squirrel and the chipmunk. You have created a beautiful story, and what started as a fight ends in a fascinating tale of friendship and help. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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An attractive option for this contest I like both the squirrel and the chipmunk. You have created a beautiful story, and what started as a fight ends in a fascinating tale of friendship and help. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and your encouraging comments.
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Lovely poem
Comment from QC Poet
Great "tail of two" relatable to man, only he would probaly choose violence. Thoroughly enjoyed reading this story, realistic characters, humorous and touching story lesson. Blessings to you and Good Luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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Great "tail of two" relatable to man, only he would probaly choose violence. Thoroughly enjoyed reading this story, realistic characters, humorous and touching story lesson. Blessings to you and Good Luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and your encouraging comments.
Comment from Teri7
This is just too cute what you have penned for the Animal Opinions writing prompt. You used very cute and very good dialogue with very adorable imagery from the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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This is just too cute what you have penned for the Animal Opinions writing prompt. You used very cute and very good dialogue with very adorable imagery from the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 01-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and your encouraging comments.
Comment from Susan X Smith
An interesting story where two animals are personified, but would animals really divide their space in half? From what I have heard, it is almost a case of survival of the fittest. But it's nice to dream of pleasant cooperation. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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An interesting story where two animals are personified, but would animals really divide their space in half? From what I have heard, it is almost a case of survival of the fittest. But it's nice to dream of pleasant cooperation. Best wishes.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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You it seems man cannot equitably divide wealth and resources either, but I agree, it is nice to dream. Thank you for taking the time to read and your comments.
Comment from LisaMay
What a sweet story of peacefully negotiated domestic resolution - share and share alike. They could've ended up fighting about which part of the backyard had the best nut trees, but sharing was the best policy. We can learn a lot from animals. Elect Squirrel!!
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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What a sweet story of peacefully negotiated domestic resolution - share and share alike. They could've ended up fighting about which part of the backyard had the best nut trees, but sharing was the best policy. We can learn a lot from animals. Elect Squirrel!!
Comment Written 01-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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I will go with your nomination. Thanks for the read and comments.
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Squirrel might make a good UK prime minister too.
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Yes, I understand you too have a similar problem to the U.S.
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I actually live in New Zealand and am quite happy with our young female Prime Minister. She has good values and is kind, intelligent and compassionate.
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My mistake I thought you were in England.
Comment from Cindy Warren
That's cute. Both are cute chubby cheeked little thieves. We were camping one summer and I thought the kids were sneaking marshmallows, till I saw one travelling up a tree! But if they can come to an agreement, perhaps humans could take a lesson from them. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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That's cute. Both are cute chubby cheeked little thieves. We were camping one summer and I thought the kids were sneaking marshmallows, till I saw one travelling up a tree! But if they can come to an agreement, perhaps humans could take a lesson from them. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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Thanks for your read and comments. Appreciated. Lucky for the kids you spotted the thief.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a great poem. Sometimes life can get rather cruel when they fight over 'nothing'. I love writing about squirrels. Enjoyed reading your story about the chipmunk and the squirrel. Good luck.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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What a great poem. Sometimes life can get rather cruel when they fight over 'nothing'. I love writing about squirrels. Enjoyed reading your story about the chipmunk and the squirrel. Good luck.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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Thanks much for your read and your comments. These two animals are truly energetic rascals.
