Me and You 40+ years of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "When Passion Becomes Love "Poetry and Short Stories by George Medina Martinez
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
A very powerful and heart-warming offering for this contest....could certainly be an offering for the Love Poem contest as well! ;) :) I would only suggest removing the excessive capitalizations as they throw the reader off as to where emphasis should be placed in the reading... :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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A very powerful and heart-warming offering for this contest....could certainly be an offering for the Love Poem contest as well! ;) :) I would only suggest removing the excessive capitalizations as they throw the reader off as to where emphasis should be placed in the reading... :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments.
The capitalization is a sort of my trademark for emphasizing certain words in my poetry. I apologize for any difficulties in interuputation of this or any of my poems.
Blessings to you.
Comment from Hitcher
Yea! Passion fueled by lust starts the ball rolling when a couple first meet that is for sure. If they don't have that I don't think their destined for that long drive : ) Nice poem, congrats on finding the ONE.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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Yea! Passion fueled by lust starts the ball rolling when a couple first meet that is for sure. If they don't have that I don't think their destined for that long drive : ) Nice poem, congrats on finding the ONE.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments.
A was a bit of a party guy back then and found a gal that was the opposite for that reason. LOL!