Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This is a delightful piece of poetry, Ricky. It contains much more hope and inner peace than usual. The closing stanza is by far my favorite:
"Shining never binding... Separate but together...
Lasting forever...
Perfection which is lasting...
Yes, more than a while!
"With Just One Smile?" "
Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019

Thanks Darling Angel of mine.
Ricky

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

This is a wonderful poem of love without the everlasting commitment, (shining never binding) yes sometimes our teachings do take awhile to reach us, very well done****kahpot

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019

Thanks and have a blessed day dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

I think the line "The music can and will ring!" influenced me the most. Interesting rewording of "heartstring" to "Heart of String." It seems as if you are exploring possibilities and a few contrasting ideas.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019

Spoctologically, Spoctological, Logically, Ilogicall.
Which means the though is quite Enterprising.
James T
Kirk.
Starship
Fanstory.
Still preaching the choir.