Light and Sweet
romance poem contest entry2 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
A wonderfully sweet treat for today's read! Hopefully your male friend will treat you right, regardless of any visit to the donut shoppe (-;
I prefer McD's coffee, but DD's honey glazed donut! In my youth, I could eat many. Now as an adult, one a week is a special treat.
Best wishes in this contest. Your illustration enticed me to read your romantic post (-:
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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A wonderfully sweet treat for today's read! Hopefully your male friend will treat you right, regardless of any visit to the donut shoppe (-;
I prefer McD's coffee, but DD's honey glazed donut! In my youth, I could eat many. Now as an adult, one a week is a special treat.
Best wishes in this contest. Your illustration enticed me to read your romantic post (-:
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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Dear Mark D.R. Thank you for your comments and review. and best wishes.
Comment from Sheridan1
The association of sticky rich treats and romance is a strong one. The images are fun.
I'm curious about the word 'through' because it makes 'creamed' sound like a verb. Perhaps you are you using it like dwell or occupy?
All in all, it sounds like a lovely oasis in a busy day.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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The association of sticky rich treats and romance is a strong one. The images are fun.
I'm curious about the word 'through' because it makes 'creamed' sound like a verb. Perhaps you are you using it like dwell or occupy?
All in all, it sounds like a lovely oasis in a busy day.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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Dear Sheridan1, Thank you for your comments and review. I will go in and take a look.