Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

Awww! This is really a sweet piece, Ricky. It would be wonderful if she and he one day came to be as one since we all need somebody to lean on and care for when times are tough. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019

Well she is a 30 year old woman named Sharon I call Sharon or Rose of Sharon he is me and it's only ever going to be friendship thanks for your review dr. Ricci 1024

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Ooooo .... an admiration or secret love from afar - intriguing! ;) ;) I'm guessing this is one from the past...a flashback of sorts...as it's from your 'Visions' book...? Be sure to pop back in there and correct the spelling in the title to 'Visceral'... :) Thanx for sharing! ;)

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019

Thanks again Yvonne for your wonderful time and review.
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Comment from Karen Luciana

Average

Hi Ricky,
Interesting poem. It seems to me that the marionette is a metaphor for a person who has felt that tough times have been running the show? It's a good metaphor. May I suggest that you edit for grammar and spelling?
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019

Actually this is a rewrite in a book entitled who's who in poetry 2012 fighting a study poetry bulimia got a better review than this to others also gave it High reviews one just told me to correct the grammar with the word visceral I never puncture Reality by taking any stars away from grammar by soul content I suggest you do that too
No disc review of the review is being cast to a cell phone there may and will be run in sentences and possible grammar errors dr. Ricci 1024