When Mom Babysat
False Teeth contest entry9 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Truly exceptional! Please accept my virtual six.
Overall presentation: exceptional; absolutely perfect artwork and beautiful choice of font style and centering.
The poem was fun to read, painting comical and vivid images of the scene playing out. I appreciate all that good rhyme, too.
Truly best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
Truly exceptional! Please accept my virtual six.
Overall presentation: exceptional; absolutely perfect artwork and beautiful choice of font style and centering.
The poem was fun to read, painting comical and vivid images of the scene playing out. I appreciate all that good rhyme, too.
Truly best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Hey, Gale, hi. Thank you so much for the fantastic review and the big six offer. I dearly appreciate the kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Ron
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I appreciated the good laugh :)
Comment from mmonaghan777
Hahahahaha! That is the best. Only kids think nothing of being adventurous with things us adults would never touch! That was a good one.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
Hahahahaha! That is the best. Only kids think nothing of being adventurous with things us adults would never touch! That was a good one.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, MM777. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from strandregs
Great poem
very well constructed and sounds real as well.
Absolutley charming and hilarious.
I really love it.
I never tried to stick my mothers teeth in the dog's mouth.
I should have :-))Z.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
Great poem
very well constructed and sounds real as well.
Absolutley charming and hilarious.
I really love it.
I never tried to stick my mothers teeth in the dog's mouth.
I should have :-))Z.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Haha, yeah, I'm sure that would have gone over great. My mom would have killed me. Lol. Thank you for the fantastic review, Strandregs. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from judester
This is so funny and the pic of the dog? nails it. Dogs are great sidekicks for laughs. I took one of my dogs and wrapped a scarf around her head like a little Russian peasant woman. The dog's forlorn face just added to the persona. When I asked my husband if he wanted to buy some potatoes, we laughed to tears. Too much time on my hands and a winning entry on yours, bravo. judester
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
This is so funny and the pic of the dog? nails it. Dogs are great sidekicks for laughs. I took one of my dogs and wrapped a scarf around her head like a little Russian peasant woman. The dog's forlorn face just added to the persona. When I asked my husband if he wanted to buy some potatoes, we laughed to tears. Too much time on my hands and a winning entry on yours, bravo. judester
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Asked if he wanted to buy some potatoes? Hahaha. Thank you so much for the fantastic review and big sixer, Judester. I dearly appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Thank you again. have a great weekend.
Comment from LyndaS
This made me laugh but then again I thought..GROSS!!! This is a cute entry into this contest. Love the art that came with it. Where did you find a photo like this? Good luck to you in the vote. Lynda
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
This made me laugh but then again I thought..GROSS!!! This is a cute entry into this contest. Love the art that came with it. Where did you find a photo like this? Good luck to you in the vote. Lynda
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Lynda. I found this picture with just a Google Image search. I lucked out finding the perfect picture. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from ShyWri
Just when I think you can't get any better, you come up with this sweet offering! I have a personal story about dentures (not my own, I mean I don't have dentures, I'm happy to say) but I'd have to kill myself if I told it in public.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
Just when I think you can't get any better, you come up with this sweet offering! I have a personal story about dentures (not my own, I mean I don't have dentures, I'm happy to say) but I'd have to kill myself if I told it in public.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Hey, Shy W, hello. Now you got me wanting to hear it. Lol. Thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer. I'm always trying to out do myself on here. Get a ridiculous idea in my head and run with it. Haha. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars, Shy. Thank you again. I'd love to hear the story someday. Have a great weekend.
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I'd tell you but I wouldn't want to end up on a Prime Suspects list!
Comment from Patty Palmer
Oh my gosh! That's an adorable story! And the picture you put with it is so hilarious! My dog got hold of mine once and he chewed them up! lol Well, the good that came out of this is, at least your puppy has a Colgate smile!! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
Oh my gosh! That's an adorable story! And the picture you put with it is so hilarious! My dog got hold of mine once and he chewed them up! lol Well, the good that came out of this is, at least your puppy has a Colgate smile!! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Patricia. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this humorous little tale.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, I laughed so much at this cute right which is spot on for the contest! That photo is a gem and I reckon you have a winner here, a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
Ha ha ha, I laughed so much at this cute right which is spot on for the contest! That photo is a gem and I reckon you have a winner here, a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review and gracious stars, Dolly. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Bill Pinder
That is a great humorous poem. I would give you six stars if I had it. Thanks for sharing this creative writing about mixing false teeth with a young child and a puppy. Bill
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
That is a great humorous poem. I would give you six stars if I had it. Thanks for sharing this creative writing about mixing false teeth with a young child and a puppy. Bill
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the great review and the big six offer, Bill. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great weekend.