"Painted Visions"
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Comment from way2gokevs
A hospital stay is ones worst experience.... You have penned your verse with a great deal of gusto............. Nicely done, enjoyed the read, keep up the good work. Cheers, Kev.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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A hospital stay is ones worst experience.... You have penned your verse with a great deal of gusto............. Nicely done, enjoyed the read, keep up the good work. Cheers, Kev.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thanks glad this touched you.
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Comment from Alex Rosel
For me, this is rather akin to something a modern day Edgar Allan Poe might write. It's laced throughout with dark imagery. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you.
And here is perhaps what, for me, is the best line of all:
A lighted clamp gets seeming placed but hung? -- I think this is great imagery. Excellent :)
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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For me, this is rather akin to something a modern day Edgar Allan Poe might write. It's laced throughout with dark imagery. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you.
And here is perhaps what, for me, is the best line of all:
A lighted clamp gets seeming placed but hung? -- I think this is great imagery. Excellent :)
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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I actually had one of those a little while ago when I woke up in the dark creepy place where they put people that are broken and non-repairable.
When I was a sheet of room I noticed it was not very many mobile people I know where children drawing colored pictures outside in the hallway to make everybody feel better somewhere paintings and I didn't want to mess them up so I walked around.
As I further explored I noticed quite a few stranger waving at me like you're happy to see me be there with them in the suffering of place which I think was beginning to become my hell.
Thanks,
Ricky 1024