"Painted Visions"
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Reflections"A Collection of Heart Felt Poetry.
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Comment from dovemarie
Dear Ricky, I didn't know you were going through an operation that might be life-threatening. You're talking about yourself as though you were already dead (Alas poor Ricky...We knew him well?) jgrace's artwork fits beautifully with this poem. Dove
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Dear Ricky, I didn't know you were going through an operation that might be life-threatening. You're talking about yourself as though you were already dead (Alas poor Ricky...We knew him well?) jgrace's artwork fits beautifully with this poem. Dove
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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It was 50/50.
Age Heart Attacks...
You know?
Broken?
Ricky
Comment from Sandra Montanino
Well, that was a powerful reflection of what I assume was heart surgery. I had a triple bypass last year and it was truly horrible. It took a lot to recover, so I really identified with your chapter. Well done!!
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Well, that was a powerful reflection of what I assume was heart surgery. I had a triple bypass last year and it was truly horrible. It took a lot to recover, so I really identified with your chapter. Well done!!
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Thanks Sandra!
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Comment from Earl Corp
I hope everything goes well with your surgery and it doesn't knock you out of action for too long. I hope you don't lose your colon. Good luck my friend and keep us posted.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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I hope everything goes well with your surgery and it doesn't knock you out of action for too long. I hope you don't lose your colon. Good luck my friend and keep us posted.
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Thanks again Earl.
Doing well.
A few more days.
Comment from Alex Rosel
An interesting and involved piece. In so few words you've conveyed so much.
Here are a couple of points that particularly caught my interest:
Time is but a distant thought... -- This is a profound statement with which to start this introspection. It is likely to intrigue the reader, prompted them to continue :)
A Wisp in the Wind?
But a Long Lost Song... / Awaiting to Mend? / A Tree whom long shed.... / His many Leaves... -- Using the imagery of the natural world as a reflection of personal thoughts is an often used trope. It works well here :)
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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An interesting and involved piece. In so few words you've conveyed so much.
Here are a couple of points that particularly caught my interest:
Time is but a distant thought... -- This is a profound statement with which to start this introspection. It is likely to intrigue the reader, prompted them to continue :)
A Wisp in the Wind?
But a Long Lost Song... / Awaiting to Mend? / A Tree whom long shed.... / His many Leaves... -- Using the imagery of the natural world as a reflection of personal thoughts is an often used trope. It works well here :)
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thanks Alex.
I too like using Natrural things in my works.
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Comment from Patty Palmer
Well, I hope everything goes well if you must really have all that work done. Not good to have a bowel blockage backing up bile. Watch out for that mesh that they've been having trouble with
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Well, I hope everything goes well if you must really have all that work done. Not good to have a bowel blockage backing up bile. Watch out for that mesh that they've been having trouble with
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thanks.
Themesgh issue is necessary in my case with weakening abdominal walls.
Still struggling though.
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Well, ya gotta do what you have to. Good luck with it, Keep ya in my prayers!
Comment from Shenelle Coplien
Great poem! I've never been a big poem reader but it kept my attention! Everything that comes will also go. You did a good job displaying that! And good luck on the surgery!
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Great poem! I've never been a big poem reader but it kept my attention! Everything that comes will also go. You did a good job displaying that! And good luck on the surgery!
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Road to meet.
And have you learn a little about me.
Ricky