Illicit Love
Declared love is not an option5 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Beautiful rhyme.
A perfect 2-4-6 syllable poem.
Every word full of truth, leading most times to nothing but destruction in more ways than not; BUT, I will never be the one to judge.
This is a great contest entry, with a very real message. That's how it is.
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Beautiful rhyme.
A perfect 2-4-6 syllable poem.
Every word full of truth, leading most times to nothing but destruction in more ways than not; BUT, I will never be the one to judge.
This is a great contest entry, with a very real message. That's how it is.
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Thanks for the read and the comments. Appreciated.
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My pleasure :)
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
Your 2-4-6 poem, "Illicit Love", displays a larger story in your contest entry. Excellent use of the required short verses and your well-chosen words work well with your selected photograph!
My best in winning the contest,
Deborah
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Dear Author,
Your 2-4-6 poem, "Illicit Love", displays a larger story in your contest entry. Excellent use of the required short verses and your well-chosen words work well with your selected photograph!
My best in winning the contest,
Deborah
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Thank you for your read and your review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-4-6, Illicit Love, has the right set up and finds a scene where two people feel they are jumping fences with their romance.
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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This 2-4-6, Illicit Love, has the right set up and finds a scene where two people feel they are jumping fences with their romance.
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Thanks for the read and the review. I guess jumping fences would depend on their age.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 2-4-6 poem and entry for the contest
The three rhymes are good choices and work very well.
Teenage love, oft forbidden, simply moves to unseen places.
Good photograph to match words
Nicely done
Good luck in the voting
Robert
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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This is an excellent 2-4-6 poem and entry for the contest
The three rhymes are good choices and work very well.
Teenage love, oft forbidden, simply moves to unseen places.
Good photograph to match words
Nicely done
Good luck in the voting
Robert
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Thanks for the read and the comments. Not only holds for teen love.
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
You perfectly describe the feelings experienced when involved in illicit rendezvous. Part of the thrill is keeping the relationship a secret. Gets your belly all knotty...then when it all fizzles out, you realise that you took a massive risk that wasn't really worth it.
Your poem meets the criteria for the contest and the presentation is great.
Good luck in the voting booth. Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Hello :)
You perfectly describe the feelings experienced when involved in illicit rendezvous. Part of the thrill is keeping the relationship a secret. Gets your belly all knotty...then when it all fizzles out, you realise that you took a massive risk that wasn't really worth it.
Your poem meets the criteria for the contest and the presentation is great.
Good luck in the voting booth. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Hi Debra,
Yes you nailed the emotions. Thanks for your read and comments.