Bond Beyond Words
A 3-5-3 Contest Offering11 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
I like this poem a lot, because it is an accurate reflection of how true friendship has no room for anger. But probably the best part of reviewing your poem is the outright laugh I got from reading your first reviewer's rating and comments. A laugh of incredulity.
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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I like this poem a lot, because it is an accurate reflection of how true friendship has no room for anger. But probably the best part of reviewing your poem is the outright laugh I got from reading your first reviewer's rating and comments. A laugh of incredulity.
Comment Written 12-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Thanx so much for your comments on this one, Lady LM -- so good to hear from you.... and, seriously, did you see that nonsense? I do not expect to get all wonderful ratings, but that?? Somebody must have 'pissed in his cornflakes' that morning or something, yeah?! ;) ;) It's okay, I just simply did not respond... and I'm sure it would do him good to know that he gave us a smile and a chuckle for the day! :) LOL! :) Take care, ma'am! :)
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It was the sneering comment "a worthwhile effort" that bugged me the most on your behalf!!
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Thanx for having my back, LisaMay -- as a teacher, you hear those things once in a while...I guess I've just conditioned my self to tune it out; otherwise, I end up hurt too often!! ;) :) You take care over there! :)
Comment from Paul R Goddard
I'm probably a harsh critic and others may give higher marks. Is the poem really true? Does it matter if it's not? Perhaps it is among friends that we can have discord without it causing a permanent rift and therefore the colours should not be muted. Still it was a worthwhile effort.
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reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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I'm probably a harsh critic and others may give higher marks. Is the poem really true? Does it matter if it's not? Perhaps it is among friends that we can have discord without it causing a permanent rift and therefore the colours should not be muted. Still it was a worthwhile effort.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Comment from Rachelle Allen
Ooooh! I LOVE this one!! It couldn't be truer, and I love the anything-but-muted colors you found in your photo choice, as well as the background for your words. Brilliantly done! Good luck in the contest. xo
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Ooooh! I LOVE this one!! It couldn't be truer, and I love the anything-but-muted colors you found in your photo choice, as well as the background for your words. Brilliantly done! Good luck in the contest. xo
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thank you for your review, Rachelle. ;)
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It was my pleasure. xo
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made effective use of all your syllables in this poetic statement
about the power of conversation among REAL friends, those who care for
and wish the best for one another.
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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You have made effective use of all your syllables in this poetic statement
about the power of conversation among REAL friends, those who care for
and wish the best for one another.
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thank you for your review, Janice.
Comment from Bill Pinder
That is a very true statement and helps keep the focus on the right perspective in this life. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest! Thank God for good friends that are supportive.
Bill
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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That is a very true statement and helps keep the focus on the right perspective in this life. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest! Thank God for good friends that are supportive.
Bill
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thank you for your review, Bill. ;)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about friendships that last a lifetime where there is no conditions that has to be perfect. We stay friends no matter what the circumstances are.
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about friendships that last a lifetime where there is no conditions that has to be perfect. We stay friends no matter what the circumstances are.
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thank you for your review, Sandra. ;)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
True friendship is beneficial to friends and society, because poor proposals from a friend are never patronized or supported by other friends; well said, well done. Write to inspire, readable for years -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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True friendship is beneficial to friends and society, because poor proposals from a friend are never patronized or supported by other friends; well said, well done. Write to inspire, readable for years -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thank you for your review. ;)
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Bond Beyond Words, has the right set up and reminds the readers that friendships are precious and need fostering to keep their importance viable.
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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This 3-5-3, Bond Beyond Words, has the right set up and reminds the readers that friendships are precious and need fostering to keep their importance viable.
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thank you for your review, Bill.
Comment from heavenempress
Hi, nice piece of poetry. well done and great image too. I enjoyed the few meaningful words. That's what makes best friends best. I highly recommend your work to others.
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Hi, nice piece of poetry. well done and great image too. I enjoyed the few meaningful words. That's what makes best friends best. I highly recommend your work to others.
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Thanx so much for your review on this one, heavenempress -- much appreciated, ma'am! ;) ;) Have a wonderful day! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved the sentiments here and of course every word is true, a problem shared is a problem halved as they say and I wish you luck with the contest, a clever and soothing write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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I loved the sentiments here and of course every word is true, a problem shared is a problem halved as they say and I wish you luck with the contest, a clever and soothing write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thank you for your review.