Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Hi Aiona, I definitely think that this can be called a love poem. Now, I'm probably the only Rhode Islander that doesn't LOVE coffee, and probably doesn't bleed coffee when they're cut! (I bleed Coke mixed with Chocolate... bring on the sugar Baby!) But I'm feeling your vibe, and if your other half does that for you... well then, the more power to ya'! ;)

 Comment Written 09-May-2019

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reply by the author on 12-May-2019

Thanks, Susan. Sorry it took me so long to get back to you. I'm on a boat in Deception Pass right now. Sailing from May 11 to 27. So I may not have internet access along Johnstone Strait. I brought coffee on this trip!!!!

reply by susand3022 on 12-May-2019

Damn!!! I can't believe you didn't take me with you!!! I'm a really great travel buddy!!! I swear!!!! (if you don't mind the snoring!) lol

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

Hmmm. A love poem? Yes . . . with a poleaxe intimated.
Humorous and a bit scary at the same time.
What do you think about a comma after 'Oh'?
Just a suggestion. Don't hurt me.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 07-May-2019

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reply by the author on 07-May-2019

LOL!!!!! Yeah, a comma sounds good. I've had two cups so far.

Comment from 24chas

Excellent

I think it definitely qualifies as a love poem on two hands. One for your husband, if he makes the coffee, and secondly, for the coffee. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-May-2019

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reply by the author on 07-May-2019

Thanks, 24chas. :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

He he he, the caffeine hit in the morning to wake the senses eh? Glad I don't have this addiction! You made me smile here, goof luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 07-May-2019

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reply by the author on 07-May-2019

Thanks, Dolly :) I hope you have a good day too.