Poetic Treasures and Dreams
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Trinity, Majesty, Eastertide"A book on nature and feelings and spirituality.
9 total reviews
Comment from frogbook
Very well said and an appropriate write for the season of renewal. A repeat of a very important piece of history as well as write full of pius faith and love.
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Very well said and an appropriate write for the season of renewal. A repeat of a very important piece of history as well as write full of pius faith and love.
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Dear frogbook, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Teri7
Donna, This is a very beautiful and well written poem about our Lord, Jesus Christ that died on the cross and arose the third day. lovely words and lovely imagery. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Donna, This is a very beautiful and well written poem about our Lord, Jesus Christ that died on the cross and arose the third day. lovely words and lovely imagery. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Dear Teri, Thanks for your comments and review. Love & blessings to you too! Donna x
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the trinity of God in one, which is differently interpretated by different groups and it is hard to decide who is right and who may have it wrong.
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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A very well-written poem about the trinity of God in one, which is differently interpretated by different groups and it is hard to decide who is right and who may have it wrong.
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Dear Sandra, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Tina Crute
Your presentation is stunning, and eye-catching! The repeated word,'three,' at the beginning of the stanzas set up each stanza well. I love the happy ending...He conquered death! This is a very good combination of devotional and story and creativity. Thank you for sharing such a special poem!
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Your presentation is stunning, and eye-catching! The repeated word,'three,' at the beginning of the stanzas set up each stanza well. I love the happy ending...He conquered death! This is a very good combination of devotional and story and creativity. Thank you for sharing such a special poem!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Dear Tina, Thank you for your comments and review. I was starting to have special feelings when I wrote it. Dove
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That's God helping you
out:) He us good that way:)
Have a great weekend!
Comment from Raul1
I believe that death can't be easily conquered. We have to go through it by steps. This poem is well written. I like it. No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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I believe that death can't be easily conquered. We have to go through it by steps. This poem is well written. I like it. No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Dear Raul1, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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You're welcome.
Comment from tfawcus
Interesting use of the number three throughout this, even to the choice of poetic form (3,6,9). It's not only in the Bible that one finds that this number is central - also in folktales around the world. Perhaps it is used to add emphasis.
Your poem paraphrases the Easter story in a way that makes it memorable.
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Interesting use of the number three throughout this, even to the choice of poetic form (3,6,9). It's not only in the Bible that one finds that this number is central - also in folktales around the world. Perhaps it is used to add emphasis.
Your poem paraphrases the Easter story in a way that makes it memorable.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Dear tfawcus, Thank you for your comments and reviews. Dove
Comment from Earl Corp
I guess I didn't realize how much three was used in the Bible. Even though you didn't choose to rhyme, your poem made sense and was spiritual. Nice job.
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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I guess I didn't realize how much three was used in the Bible. Even though you didn't choose to rhyme, your poem made sense and was spiritual. Nice job.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Dear Earl Corp, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation, Dove.
-Your note is appreciated.
-The syllable count is good,
and you have written
a good poem based
on the theme of three.
-I like how you preface
some lines with "See" to
emphasize your thoughts.
-I like the description in verse two,
but each one is effective
and progresses well.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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-Nice image and
presentation, Dove.
-Your note is appreciated.
-The syllable count is good,
and you have written
a good poem based
on the theme of three.
-I like how you preface
some lines with "See" to
emphasize your thoughts.
-I like the description in verse two,
but each one is effective
and progresses well.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Dear Pam, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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You are welcome, Dove.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-6-9 suite, Trinity, Majesty, Eastertide, notes the three in the powerful story of the Passion Play. The multiples of three are found in the poetic structure as well. Nice.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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This 3-6-9 suite, Trinity, Majesty, Eastertide, notes the three in the powerful story of the Passion Play. The multiples of three are found in the poetic structure as well. Nice.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Dear Bill, Thank you for your comments and review. I called it a "combination" poem because I used First Word rhyme ( I used that in a contest I created) e.g. We, see, three, at the beginning of each line, and I also love the 3-6-9 form. Dove