Comment from country ranch writer

Exceptional

Life is to short my friends we need to be more understanding with each other for tomorrow's are never promised I know from experience and it is hard to face the end

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019

Thanks for the insightful review and shiny stars. How are you doing these days? Wishing you peace and joy today. j

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I like the THEME of regret this story has. Couples often fight/argue and say things they regret. Good description of Tom's spat and the flying feeder. Now he spills tears as he sees the birds eating the seeds that fight sowed. One small error: Keep your verb tense consistent (past). "He only remember[ED] her being so angry." Rod

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019

Thanks for the insightful review and correction. I changed it to recalled since I had already used remember, oops. Have a great week end, j

reply by RodG on 14-Apr-2019

You are very welcome. Rod

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

There is something very satisfying about the Karma's a bitch aspect of this. Thank gawd Tom's not so bereft he can't enjoy it, as well. Terrific entry! I wish you much luck with it. xo

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019

Something similar happened to me, but it was popcorn kernels and nobody died. Hah, I had to laugh when I saw those little corn stalks poking through, the next summer. Thanks for the insightful review, have a great Sunday. Cheers, j

reply by Rachelle Allen on 14-Apr-2019

That's a way happier ending!