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NaPoWriMo 2019

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National Poetry Writing Month

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Comment from Joan E.
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The Triolet is a neat vehicle for you to capture your sightings of the lizards. I enjoyed your rhymes and repeats for emphasis. The iguana's eye in the picture really seems to be watching us! Smiles and happy Sunday- Joan

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Thank you :)
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Alicia, I'll let you go run and jump with the little critters...LOL...the only place I see them is on TV...I love your poem sweet girl...and love your picture and colors...always very well written you...I hope you are doing well...and you have a great weekend as well...God Bless you...Love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
    Hi Linda! You're very kind. Thank you. God bless you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
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Hi Alicia,

A well written Triolet poem. I've seen lots of iguanas when in Mexico. They love to sun themselves and seem placid, but can move quite fast when they want to. "The little critter can dance too." :) ... my fave line.

Hugs,
Connie

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
    Hi Connie! I've seen those wall decor iguanas at Mexican Restaurants. Mexico scares me. I couldn't ever go there alone. They eat insects. It's trip I would have to take in marital bliss or something. Lolz but true. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from lyenochka
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How cool! I like iguanas and lizards. Glad you can enjoy them while you're there. I like your triolet which shows me the happy dancing nature of the miniature dinosaur.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
    Thank you :)
Comment from BeasPeas
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Iguanas aren't my faves, Alicia. I prefer cats and dogs, but I have to say the colorful critter in the illustration holds my interest. A nicely written Triolet. Marilyn

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
    Hi! I use to play with the little lizards like in the geico commercial growing up. The large iguanas appear to be new to South Florida. Maybe 20-years and they say it's desert. Not sure if those large iguana reptiles will survive subtropical. It seems too comfortable like a heaven. Thank you :)
Comment from 24chas
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I enjoyed this write, sunnilicious. It was fun to read and I liked the bouncy action in it. The flow was good as was the imagery. Nice job of writing.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
    You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from royowen
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A great triolet Alicia. I this is a very good triolet, (be posting another later) the ekphrastic interpretation is very good, it does seem that.way, probably suspicious dear friend, good luck in the contest, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
    Hi Roy! I saw plenty iguanas around South Florida on my travels there. Pretty normal if you ask me. I grew up playing with the little lizards. The iguanas appear to be new. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
reply by royowen on 03-Jul-2019
    Migration perhaps? Don't tell Donald Trump.