NaPoWriMo 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "An Attempted Blitz"National Poetry Writing Month
13 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Alicia. Well--I like it, too! Great job with this fun poem. I like to call these tangential poems because one thought leads to another and the whole thing flows. Yours is fun. The reader has no idea where you will take it, but that's a good thing--makes it interesting and surprising.
Is there a little typo here?:
"Whereabouts to doom
Dooms (doom?) has a day"
Marilyn
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Hi Alicia. Well--I like it, too! Great job with this fun poem. I like to call these tangential poems because one thought leads to another and the whole thing flows. Yours is fun. The reader has no idea where you will take it, but that's a good thing--makes it interesting and surprising.
Is there a little typo here?:
"Whereabouts to doom
Dooms (doom?) has a day"
Marilyn
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Hi! You're nice. Something to think about. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your Blitz Poem and a fast-paced trip to Las Vegas, even though you're really going to vacation in Florida. I liked your focus on thinking "good thoughts" despite the fact that travel can be complicated. Here's to "faith"! -Joan
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you for sharing your Blitz Poem and a fast-paced trip to Las Vegas, even though you're really going to vacation in Florida. I liked your focus on thinking "good thoughts" despite the fact that travel can be complicated. Here's to "faith"! -Joan
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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You're nice. Thank you :)
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I am glad you have caught up--enjoy the summer- Joan
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written nonsense poem. It leans more to a loop poem than a blitz poem. I also are not nearby the description of the Blitz poem rules but it seem to me more like a loop poem that you done, but the content was entertaining.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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A very well-written nonsense poem. It leans more to a loop poem than a blitz poem. I also are not nearby the description of the Blitz poem rules but it seem to me more like a loop poem that you done, but the content was entertaining.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Hi Sandra. I'm finally catching up by reading reviews. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Irish Rain
I love this blitz poem Miss Alicia!
I don't think I've ever seen one before.
It looks kinda like a loop poem.
Fun in Vegas! And Miami!
I'd love one of those drinks!!
Quite impressive!!
Blessings...
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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I love this blitz poem Miss Alicia!
I don't think I've ever seen one before.
It looks kinda like a loop poem.
Fun in Vegas! And Miami!
I'd love one of those drinks!!
Quite impressive!!
Blessings...
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Hi Judy! Thanks for always being there. Also, thank you for the review. God bless you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia (aka Sunnilicious)
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Happy 4th to you Miss Alicia!!
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, suunilicious. It was really fun and should have been called a downhill poem because once I started reading it seemed to speed up as I went through it. Maybe a stupid suggestion but add another line or two to link it back to the beginning to signify a crazy cycle of activity. Just a thought. Good job on this one.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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This was a good read, suunilicious. It was really fun and should have been called a downhill poem because once I started reading it seemed to speed up as I went through it. Maybe a stupid suggestion but add another line or two to link it back to the beginning to signify a crazy cycle of activity. Just a thought. Good job on this one.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you
God bless you too :)
Comment from royowen
Well done Aliia, you're doing very well in this April challenge, this looks very much like a loop poem. which is joining words at the end of a line, but with some rhyming. You're doing really well Alicia, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Well done Aliia, you're doing very well in this April challenge, this looks very much like a loop poem. which is joining words at the end of a line, but with some rhyming. You're doing really well Alicia, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Hi Roy! I'm catching up from Easter like finally. Writing blitz is too wild for me. Looping seems better nature. I should try to write a loop or two. Lolz. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia
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Well done
Comment from dragonpoet
This long loop poem shows the hassles of travelling. It seems all the traffic and travelers chose the beach over Vegas. A trip to Vegas would not have fitted with the picture nor would the drinks by the water at the end of the poem.
Good answer to the prompt. Keep writing
dp
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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This long loop poem shows the hassles of travelling. It seems all the traffic and travelers chose the beach over Vegas. A trip to Vegas would not have fitted with the picture nor would the drinks by the water at the end of the poem.
Good answer to the prompt. Keep writing
dp
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you
Have a happy & safe 4th of July :)
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My pleasure, Sunni. Happy 4th to you too.
dp
Comment from dmt1967
This is a good poem but a bit long. My attention started to go about halfway through. I did like it, though. I like the picture as well as it made me feel warm. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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This is a good poem but a bit long. My attention started to go about halfway through. I did like it, though. I like the picture as well as it made me feel warm. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you
Have a happy & safe 4th of July :)
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Sunni,
This is a very well written piece, my friend. It has a very unique feel about it, sort of stream of consciousness, free association quality. Very nicely written. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest. Jan :-)
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Hi Sunni,
This is a very well written piece, my friend. It has a very unique feel about it, sort of stream of consciousness, free association quality. Very nicely written. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest. Jan :-)
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Reading all your words here makes me wonder if this is really a holiday, it is so very stressful to travel these days and share the beach with a crowd, visit zoos and stay in expensive hotels. I think I will stay at home, he he he, you brought the hustle and bustle of the holiday scene to me here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Reading all your words here makes me wonder if this is really a holiday, it is so very stressful to travel these days and share the beach with a crowd, visit zoos and stay in expensive hotels. I think I will stay at home, he he he, you brought the hustle and bustle of the holiday scene to me here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you :)