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Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Well, I think you captured a lot of those elements of the wild west with outlaws and fast shooting and even faster escaping. Enjoyed reading your story poem, Earl.
"Uh-oh this could how it ends" (missing a word like 'be')
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Lol. Well, I think you captured a lot of those elements of the wild west with outlaws and fast shooting and even faster escaping. Enjoyed reading your story poem, Earl.
"Uh-oh this could how it ends" (missing a word like 'be')
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thank you very much.This was a fun write. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Congratulations on your 1st place win!!
This use to be one of my favorite shows growing up.
You chose all the right pictures ... Richard Boone (Paladin), his calling card, the icon of the show's name showing Paladin drawing his gun.
The words of your poem held humor, and I loved your rhyme.
I love the old Westerns, and I love this poem :)
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Congratulations on your 1st place win!!
This use to be one of my favorite shows growing up.
You chose all the right pictures ... Richard Boone (Paladin), his calling card, the icon of the show's name showing Paladin drawing his gun.
The words of your poem held humor, and I loved your rhyme.
I love the old Westerns, and I love this poem :)
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Thank you very much Gale. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Congratulations Earl on your win! I enjoyed your story! This old gun fighter has been immortalised here in your story! A fun write Earl, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Congratulations Earl on your win! I enjoyed your story! This old gun fighter has been immortalised here in your story! A fun write Earl, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Thank you very much Dolly. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Janet Foor
Congratulation!!! I loved the old western TV show, Paladin. This is a very clever rhyming poem and I enjoyed reading.
Well done Earl.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Congratulation!!! I loved the old western TV show, Paladin. This is a very clever rhyming poem and I enjoyed reading.
Well done Earl.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Thank you very much Janet. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Heather Knight
Very funny. I like the fast rhythm of your poem. I also like the rhyme and the light-hearted style.
Thaks so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Very funny. I like the fast rhythm of your poem. I also like the rhyme and the light-hearted style.
Thaks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Mia Twysted
I like the idea and do feel the western theme of this piece. However, it felt somewhat choppy and was a little hard to read, but that might be because I don't know a lot about poetry.
Good luck.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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I like the idea and do feel the western theme of this piece. However, it felt somewhat choppy and was a little hard to read, but that might be because I don't know a lot about poetry.
Good luck.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Dont feel bad, I don't know a lot about poetry either.
Comment from l.raven
HI Earl, one of my all time favorite westerns...and the Rifleman...I love your poem my sweet friend....love the wording...very well written...and love the picture...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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HI Earl, one of my all time favorite westerns...and the Rifleman...I love your poem my sweet friend....love the wording...very well written...and love the picture...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 10-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Thank you Linda. My favorite western was Alias Smith and Jones. I wish the western would make a comeback, I'm tired of cops and legal shows. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
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I am with you Earl...I would much rather have the westerns back...and you my friend are so welcome...love xxoo
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your story is certainly Old West. It is well-plotted, smoothly flowing,
and entertaining (maybe not the best word choice since two men ended
up dead!).
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Your story is certainly Old West. It is well-plotted, smoothly flowing,
and entertaining (maybe not the best word choice since two men ended
up dead!).
Comment Written 10-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from WryWriter
LOL! You ended up a long way from John Wayne. Funny how the muse works. I like this poem. You get into the mind of an outlaw and take off soaring "like a bat out of hell." Excellent rhyming with "moot" and "pursuit."
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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LOL! You ended up a long way from John Wayne. Funny how the muse works. I like this poem. You get into the mind of an outlaw and take off soaring "like a bat out of hell." Excellent rhyming with "moot" and "pursuit."
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from bhogg
Had to smile as I read through this. Certainly easy to read in a pleasant rhyme scheme, but more than that, reminded me of times past. My parents didn't usually watch shows that we all liked, e.g., Lawrence Welk, Syd Ceasar, etc. I can tell you though, we all loved 'Have Gun Will Travel'. Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Had to smile as I read through this. Certainly easy to read in a pleasant rhyme scheme, but more than that, reminded me of times past. My parents didn't usually watch shows that we all liked, e.g., Lawrence Welk, Syd Ceasar, etc. I can tell you though, we all loved 'Have Gun Will Travel'. Well done.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Thank you very much for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.