NaPoWriMo 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Quiet Moments"National Poetry Writing Month
10 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Alicia. You acknowledged two things--the lanky tree that probably some people have "given up on" to bloom at all and we all love butterflies. Marilyn
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Hi Alicia. You acknowledged two things--the lanky tree that probably some people have "given up on" to bloom at all and we all love butterflies. Marilyn
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Hi Marilyn! Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from lyenochka
I love your friendly attitude toward the tree and how tree and butterfly communed with you in this almost spring day for lunch. Lovely poem and presentation, Alicia!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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I love your friendly attitude toward the tree and how tree and butterfly communed with you in this almost spring day for lunch. Lovely poem and presentation, Alicia!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Hi Alicia,
That would make for a lovely quiet moment ... to sit beneath a tree with little pink flowers on a sunny day, and to have a butterfly flitting nearby.
You created a calming and peaceful imagery for your reader. Well done!
Hugs,
Connie
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Hi Alicia,
That would make for a lovely quiet moment ... to sit beneath a tree with little pink flowers on a sunny day, and to have a butterfly flitting nearby.
You created a calming and peaceful imagery for your reader. Well done!
Hugs,
Connie
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Thank you. Have a nice day. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Joan E.
You are off to a great start for this month's NaPoWriMo Challenge with your daydreaming. I could visualize the blooming cherry tree and the butterfly. I enjoyed the vivid, reinforcing pictures as well. Here's to more "Quiet Moments"! -Joan
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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You are off to a great start for this month's NaPoWriMo Challenge with your daydreaming. I could visualize the blooming cherry tree and the butterfly. I enjoyed the vivid, reinforcing pictures as well. Here's to more "Quiet Moments"! -Joan
Comment Written 01-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Hi Joan. You're nice. Thank you. Goodnight hugs :)
Comment from krys123
Cheers, Alicia;
> Isn't it brilliance when a daydream sparks and creativity that abounds with emphatically robust entertainment that especially made me happy. And you know when that happens and breaks up your moment no matter what moment that is and stops you in your tracks just to enjoy.
> Thanks for sharing that moment of your day that now has enriched my own part of the day, thanks.
> Take care and have a good one and very well done.
Alx
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Cheers, Alicia;
> Isn't it brilliance when a daydream sparks and creativity that abounds with emphatically robust entertainment that especially made me happy. And you know when that happens and breaks up your moment no matter what moment that is and stops you in your tracks just to enjoy.
> Thanks for sharing that moment of your day that now has enriched my own part of the day, thanks.
> Take care and have a good one and very well done.
Alx
Comment Written 01-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Hi Alex. You're nice. Thank you. Goodnight hugs :)
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You are very welcome, Alicia and blessings of happiness and health.
Alx
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem/prayer about the beautiful day and the choice to have your breakfast under the special tree outside in nature where the winter's day seem to be warmer than usual.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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A very well-written poem/prayer about the beautiful day and the choice to have your breakfast under the special tree outside in nature where the winter's day seem to be warmer than usual.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, Sunnilicious. It was very smooth and relaxed and I could really picture myself doing the same thing. It's amazing where inspiration can come from, isn't it? Good job.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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This was a good read, Sunnilicious. It was very smooth and relaxed and I could really picture myself doing the same thing. It's amazing where inspiration can come from, isn't it? Good job.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from royowen
So you're doing the challenge Alicia, good on you, it's pretty tough to tackle it I think, although some onsite already write 2 a week anyway, but beautifully written, dear friend good luck dear girl, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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So you're doing the challenge Alicia, good on you, it's pretty tough to tackle it I think, although some onsite already write 2 a week anyway, but beautifully written, dear friend good luck dear girl, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 01-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Thank you :)
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Welcome Alisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A warm winter day, I bet there aren't many of those, so here you have remembered it in your poem filled with the joys of pink flowers and butterflies, winter will soon turn into spring, a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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A warm winter day, I bet there aren't many of those, so here you have remembered it in your poem filled with the joys of pink flowers and butterflies, winter will soon turn into spring, a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Sunni,
This is a really beautiful poem.about appreciating nature. I love the images you have chosen to display as they work very well to complement your verse. Thanks for a pleasant read. Jan :-)
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Hi Sunni,
This is a really beautiful poem.about appreciating nature. I love the images you have chosen to display as they work very well to complement your verse. Thanks for a pleasant read. Jan :-)
Comment Written 01-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Thank you :)