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Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
3 total reviews
Comment from
Barb Hensongispsaca
I don't easily give a six but this one is not only perfectly done for the contest but you kept it flowing and made us laugh at the same time. Very nicely done
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
Thank you, Barb! That means a lot, coming from you.
Comment from
called2rite
All parents understand this poem! Don't wake the baby is definitely a blessing to be able to do, extremely so, when you can't help an ah-choo. The poem brought a smile to me as I remember those days. Keep up the good work. comment made on 3-19-19 by called2rite.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
Comment from
24chas
This was a cute read, Aiona. I can remember those days when my daughter was just a baby. We were afraid to make any noise and I can remember doing just what this poem said. Nice job.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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