Three going on four
A beautiful three year old4 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Ohhh fastdigits, just seeing your name made me smile. I hope that you are well. I enjoyed reading your poem. Children are the best medicine. Oh how they can steal your heart, especially little girls. I especially liked:
as beautiful as the midnight sky
(The midnight sky is a favorite of mine.
In about 45 mins., I'll be getting ready
to do my nightly moonwatch.)
fd, we can start the match-making process now. I have a handsome, almost four- years old, grandson...he's still available. Lol.
Thank you for making me smile. I just got my computer running again.
Keep the blue waters flowing. Don't be a stranger. Keep the poems coming. How's everything up there in NYC, my hometown. Bloomer
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Ohhh fastdigits, just seeing your name made me smile. I hope that you are well. I enjoyed reading your poem. Children are the best medicine. Oh how they can steal your heart, especially little girls. I especially liked:
as beautiful as the midnight sky
(The midnight sky is a favorite of mine.
In about 45 mins., I'll be getting ready
to do my nightly moonwatch.)
fd, we can start the match-making process now. I have a handsome, almost four- years old, grandson...he's still available. Lol.
Thank you for making me smile. I just got my computer running again.
Keep the blue waters flowing. Don't be a stranger. Keep the poems coming. How's everything up there in NYC, my hometown. Bloomer
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello and smiles to you fastdigits for your cute poem about A beautiful three year old girl three going on four
and how you met her at
who was at my cousin Pearl (home)--
some how you need to make clearer where you met this cute girl three growing on four
Gert
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Hello and smiles to you fastdigits for your cute poem about A beautiful three year old girl three going on four
and how you met her at
who was at my cousin Pearl (home)--
some how you need to make clearer where you met this cute girl three growing on four
Gert
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
Comment from Kathleen Washnis
A sweet poem in appreciation of a beautiful little girl! I like how you say she is as beautiful as the midnight sky! A picture would enhance your words as I would be more prone to give it a five star then. I guess the one stumbling block that I kept reading over again was your second line when you say who was at my cousin Pearl - shouldn't it say, who was at my cousin Pearl's. So nice of you to write of a sweet little girl!
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A sweet poem in appreciation of a beautiful little girl! I like how you say she is as beautiful as the midnight sky! A picture would enhance your words as I would be more prone to give it a five star then. I guess the one stumbling block that I kept reading over again was your second line when you say who was at my cousin Pearl - shouldn't it say, who was at my cousin Pearl's. So nice of you to write of a sweet little girl!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a cute, four line poem. Your theme of a cute little girl is very good and supports your title of ..Three Going on Four... Well done. I would suggest you add a photograph of a little girl. It will enhance the overall presentation.
Melissa
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This is a cute, four line poem. Your theme of a cute little girl is very good and supports your title of ..Three Going on Four... Well done. I would suggest you add a photograph of a little girl. It will enhance the overall presentation.
Melissa
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019