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Comment from crzypnter
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This is a creative poem that many have pondered the same question about understanding the word of God. But it's blind faith and your authors notes helped to further this poem along. For sharing God bless
August

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2021

Comment from Dr. Nad
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This was an interesting attempt on behalf of the author to provide some clarity to some of the age-old questions concerning God. I'm not so sure that from my perspective I understood what was being said. We each have our own way of expressing ourselves and we all have cheerleaders and critics. On this piece, I guess I'm more of an onlooker rather than either of the other options.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2021

Comment from Janice Canerdy
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This piece is deeply spiritual and thought-provoking, expressing a desire to understand God better in order to serve Him better. (You said a lot of people prove God wrong. Did you mean they TRY to prove Him wrong?)

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2021

Comment from mobileliz
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I know enough to know this is a good piece, but I don't know enough about poetry to give it a poetic review. I'm not sure I understand what the author is trying to say. It sounds argumentative with God, but maybe I'm wrong.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2021

Comment from Wendy G
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I enjoy this unique style of writing that you have, where words and thoughts pour forth, and you make the reader think about these big questions: God, His justice, His apparent lack of answers and so on. Thank you for sharing and making us work. Appropriate and right to do so.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2021

Comment from Mastery
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Very inspirational writing as usual from you, Alcreator. I liked these lines especially well:

"Make me clear, why I should believe, God can do everything for everyone
Earnestly, why God entertains no reviews of His justice immediately..."

Thanks for sharing, my friend. bob

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2021

Comment from Begin Again
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A wonderful poem to read and enjoy. I don't know the ins and outs or technicalities, but I can feel the thoughts within. It is for us to believe and trust that God is always with us (whether our troubles are dark or we're feeling good) He hears us, he knows, he listens, and he may not feel it is right to give us what we pray for, but he knows where we must go. thank you...Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2021

Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Hello ALD, you cannot expect anyone to clarify for you the word of God. You are a firm believer in God and must make your own decisions. Not everyone will agree with you but that should make no difference. When we are told that God made us in his own image, of course there is diversity. We are not expected to believe that all human creation is expected to look like him. Everyone makes their own decisions about religion and beliefs. We are all given free will. Interesting acrostic - warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2021

Comment from Precious Owuamalam
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This is all because He is patient, omnipotent ad omniscient. His ways and mode of action are a mystery and are different from ours even though we were made in His own image and likeness. He is a very merciful God. Many thanks for sharing such a lovely piece.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2021

Comment from Dilettante junior
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Nice job with your poem. It speaks of deep issues that many people struggle with on a day to day basis and the importance of differentiating right from wrong. 'Only, God creates everything first, but when, how, and why, is unclear'- that is God's true beauty. Bravo, DJ.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2021