The Holy Ghost
This ghost is a part of my life.7 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This short story has a very important main character. The Holy Ghost (Spirit) does have a calming effect and also gives us our gifts. Without
this Ghost we wouldn't find inspiration to write or use any of our other talents.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
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This short story has a very important main character. The Holy Ghost (Spirit) does have a calming effect and also gives us our gifts. Without
this Ghost we wouldn't find inspiration to write or use any of our other talents.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your poignant story for the ghost contest, Brigitte. I enjoyed reading it. You expressed your thoughts/feelings well. You give readers much to think about in a great way without being preachy. Good job and thanks for sharing and caring. Jan
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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You did a great job with your poignant story for the ghost contest, Brigitte. I enjoyed reading it. You expressed your thoughts/feelings well. You give readers much to think about in a great way without being preachy. Good job and thanks for sharing and caring. Jan
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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This is not the usual ghost story but all that came to my mind. I felt it worthy of sharing. Thank you for reading and it did place in the contest, thanks to readers such as yourself. I appreciate your support and kind words.
Many blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
What a testimony to the Holy Spirit and His workings in the life of the author. I personally believe in the Holy Spirit and He lives in my heart. But, for those that don't know him, this story you have written feels like a welcome invitation. Well, well done, and a beautiful contest entry!
Yes, I join you in praise and prayer :)
(I am so very sorry about the loss of your daughter. Truly.)
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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What a testimony to the Holy Spirit and His workings in the life of the author. I personally believe in the Holy Spirit and He lives in my heart. But, for those that don't know him, this story you have written feels like a welcome invitation. Well, well done, and a beautiful contest entry!
Yes, I join you in praise and prayer :)
(I am so very sorry about the loss of your daughter. Truly.)
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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I thank you for joining me in my belief. Your time is appreciated as is your sympathy. The Holy Spirit has to be hovering or I wouldn't make day by day.
Hopefully, all will enjoy this and accept the invitation.
Many blessings,
Anon
Comment from Sally Law
I returned to review this after the vote. I, too, adore the ghost who is most holy. He is the good spirit of God. He lives within us as believers in Christ. I hear His voice as He calls and speaks to me daily. A refreshing article and entry on a ghost.
All my best,
Sally :+)
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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I returned to review this after the vote. I, too, adore the ghost who is most holy. He is the good spirit of God. He lives within us as believers in Christ. I hear His voice as He calls and speaks to me daily. A refreshing article and entry on a ghost.
All my best,
Sally :+)
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Thank you for returning to this post. I truly believe the words penned. This is a different take on the prompt but the only one that made sense to me. I appreciate your time and kind comments.
Have a blessed day.
Anon
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You?re so welcome. It made total sense to me. It was the first one I read.
Sal :+)
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Thank you again.
Blessings...
Anon
Comment from Earl Corp
Kind of confused when I inititially hit this it said spiritual poetry. I see the contest is for a story not a poem. This being the case there should be a beginning middle and end. There isn't and there isn't any punctuation it's a 50 word long sentence.
Much improved. It won't allow me to up it to six stars which it surely deserves now. Very nice job!!!!
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Kind of confused when I inititially hit this it said spiritual poetry. I see the contest is for a story not a poem. This being the case there should be a beginning middle and end. There isn't and there isn't any punctuation it's a 50 word long sentence.
Much improved. It won't allow me to up it to six stars which it surely deserves now. Very nice job!!!!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Thank you my friend for this helpful read and review. You are so correct and it has been made into a story. Hopefully, the beginning, middle and end are evident along with punctuation.
Again, I thank you.
Anon
Comment from Chris Davies
A lovely poem, full of sentiment and belief. I admire your ability to put your faith into meaningful words. The picture was appropriate, too. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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A lovely poem, full of sentiment and belief. I admire your ability to put your faith into meaningful words. The picture was appropriate, too. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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I have edited this to follow contest guideline . I have made it a "ghost story". Hopefully, it is an adequate submission. Thank you for reading and reminding me that it was a poem and not a story.
Have a great day!
Anon
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written write about the ghost that is in your life. That same ghost, which is the Holy Ghost it is in my life too! Best wishes in the contest. I hope you have a very happy Valentines Day! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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This is a very well written write about the ghost that is in your life. That same ghost, which is the Holy Ghost it is in my life too! Best wishes in the contest. I hope you have a very happy Valentines Day! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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I have edited this to follow contest guideline . I have made it a "ghost story". Hopefully, it is an adequate submission. Thank you for reading and reminding me that it was a poem and not a story.
Have a great day!
Anon