Life Defined
Life is what you make it.5 total reviews
Comment from Ima L. Ami
I love that you compared life to a taco! That is not only genius, but so very true. This is a great poem with lots of character and humor--just like life should be. Good luck in the contest, and may you be blessed with an abundantly filled taco for all of your days.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
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I love that you compared life to a taco! That is not only genius, but so very true. This is a great poem with lots of character and humor--just like life should be. Good luck in the contest, and may you be blessed with an abundantly filled taco for all of your days.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
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Thank so much for this supportive review. Contests are not my forte but I love to try to win one.
May your "taco" be brimming with all that is good!
Blessings,
Brigitte
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You're so very welcome! Bon appetite :)
Comment from Polarpanda
Love the idea here, and the fact that you were able to inject a little humor into this contest which seemed to be lacking in it. Nonetheless, your poem is also very true. Some of the rhyme seems a little forced, but overall, very nice.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
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Love the idea here, and the fact that you were able to inject a little humor into this contest which seemed to be lacking in it. Nonetheless, your poem is also very true. Some of the rhyme seems a little forced, but overall, very nice.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
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Thank you for reading and this honest review. Yes, some was forced and I am still trying to make it better. I appreciate an honest review.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from Tootie
Awesome poem. I enjoyed reading it and totally agree to what it says! I love the artwork that you chose for this too. I've used several of VMarguarite's artwork for my poems. Very special! Blessings, Cathy
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019
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Awesome poem. I enjoyed reading it and totally agree to what it says! I love the artwork that you chose for this too. I've used several of VMarguarite's artwork for my poems. Very special! Blessings, Cathy
Comment Written 18-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019
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She definitely posts some great work and I too use her work frequently. Thank you for reading and the kind review for my efforts.
Hugs,
Brigitte
Comment from KyColonel Randal
Thank you for sharing. I appreciate the simile, but now you've made me hungry. With eight lines, you meet the requirement of having less than 12, and the poem definitely rhymes. Also, "taco cat" spelled backwards is still "taco cat." So there's that... Good luck with your contest entry!
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019
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Thank you for sharing. I appreciate the simile, but now you've made me hungry. With eight lines, you meet the requirement of having less than 12, and the poem definitely rhymes. Also, "taco cat" spelled backwards is still "taco cat." So there's that... Good luck with your contest entry!
Comment Written 17-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019
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Thank for reading and liking my poem. The effort was there but it still lacks something. I am working on it. Had not thought of the backwards taco cat, thanks; that's cool.
Blessings and go eat...
Brigitte
Comment from meeshu
This is a very good piece, consistent rhymes, good phrasing with great rhythm and flow. Life is a Taco? I think I've heard that before..
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019
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This is a very good piece, consistent rhymes, good phrasing with great rhythm and flow. Life is a Taco? I think I've heard that before..
Comment Written 17-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019
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Thank you for reading and liking this one. It lacks something but with effort I can edit to make better.
Blessings,
Brigitte