A Curious Child
A child's brain is like a sponge.3 total reviews
Comment from WryWriter
Now this is what I call a great poem for children...the big ones and the little ones. It reminds me of that talkative stage...WHY? WHY? WHY? The author's talent with wording demands one race through the poem as if a child is constantly asking questions at rapid fire pace...which they do. Great job! Wish I had a six star!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Now this is what I call a great poem for children...the big ones and the little ones. It reminds me of that talkative stage...WHY? WHY? WHY? The author's talent with wording demands one race through the poem as if a child is constantly asking questions at rapid fire pace...which they do. Great job! Wish I had a six star!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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I am glad you enjoyed this poem. Children are like sponges, questioning everything. I love it! This was fun to write for I am confronted with whys everyday. Thank you for reading and the positive review.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from Y. M. Roger
I like your angle here in that the motivation is aimed at the parent/adult through the eyes of the child -- great write! :) ;) You might want to pop back in there and eliminate the extra space after your first stanza -- doesn't effect the presentation, but does affect the 'flow' especially when read out loud...:) :) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls!
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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I like your angle here in that the motivation is aimed at the parent/adult through the eyes of the child -- great write! :) ;) You might want to pop back in there and eliminate the extra space after your first stanza -- doesn't effect the presentation, but does affect the 'flow' especially when read out loud...:) :) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for this great review. I added a stanza, hope it makes it more complete.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from Sugarray77
What a great response and entry for the Kiddies Motivational.... the slant on this to focus on curiosity is very clever and makes this poem blossom with wit... great write.
Melissa
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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What a great response and entry for the Kiddies Motivational.... the slant on this to focus on curiosity is very clever and makes this poem blossom with wit... great write.
Melissa
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for this great review. I added a stanza, hope it makes it more complete.
Blessings,
Brigitte