Faulty Forecast?
a 5-7-5 poem about the weather4 total reviews
Comment from Ms. Snyder
Very nice 5-7-5. I love the way your words are correlating to the picture so eloquently. I think this will do well in the contest if it is still competing. I'm sorry that I just got to it now. It's 2:00 am on Sunday morning and I have already given out all of my 6's! It is crazy that I am reading so much that I know what I'm giving before. This week that stops. I will only give sixes out next week after I have read things for that particular week as I am finally going to slow down. I have been killing myself trying to promote work on the site for ranking and getting way too little sleep! So hopefully as you put stuff out next week after Sunday I know a long time from now, but I will at least have everyone on an even playing field. Cause for a few weeks there I think I started to have favorites. I like your stuff a lot. I don't even know if I've ever given you a six, but this deserves it! So please take my VIRTUAL SIX. Cheers, Fonda
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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Very nice 5-7-5. I love the way your words are correlating to the picture so eloquently. I think this will do well in the contest if it is still competing. I'm sorry that I just got to it now. It's 2:00 am on Sunday morning and I have already given out all of my 6's! It is crazy that I am reading so much that I know what I'm giving before. This week that stops. I will only give sixes out next week after I have read things for that particular week as I am finally going to slow down. I have been killing myself trying to promote work on the site for ranking and getting way too little sleep! So hopefully as you put stuff out next week after Sunday I know a long time from now, but I will at least have everyone on an even playing field. Cause for a few weeks there I think I started to have favorites. I like your stuff a lot. I don't even know if I've ever given you a six, but this deserves it! So please take my VIRTUAL SIX. Cheers, Fonda
Comment Written 13-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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Your virtual six is greatly appreciated, as are your review and comments. Actually, Faulty Forecast won't be competing until April.
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Oh boy, not until April - I hope I can remember that far. I can barely remember yesterday... LOL, I'm glad you appreciate the VIRTUAL one. Cheers, Fonda
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Sorry, I thought I'd enter it before I forgot!
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LOL - I think a lot of us should start a Ginko Biloba club! I would be the treasurer or bookkeeper. LOL
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That sounds like a good idea!
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This was wonderfully thought up and a great entry for the 5-7-5 contest. Syllable count is spot on and the last line was a hoot. OOps there is show my age.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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This was wonderfully thought up and a great entry for the 5-7-5 contest. Syllable count is spot on and the last line was a hoot. OOps there is show my age.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you for all the wonderful stars and the wonderfully kind review! Don't worry, I'm of the age hoot works.
Comment from Kelly Grim
"rained down in sunshine" -- what a wonderful line! Great little 5-7-5. Really enjoyed this read and the presentation too... such a warm, sunny feeling the words and the pic put forth!
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
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"rained down in sunshine" -- what a wonderful line! Great little 5-7-5. Really enjoyed this read and the presentation too... such a warm, sunny feeling the words and the pic put forth!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much! I greatly appreciate all the stars and you very kind review!l
Comment from Sugarray77
Good job on this lovely 5-7-5... you described yours as showers of sunshine... so apt!!! I like this verse and the whimsical artwork that you picked to accompany it. Well done and good luck too.
Melissa
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
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Good job on this lovely 5-7-5... you described yours as showers of sunshine... so apt!!! I like this verse and the whimsical artwork that you picked to accompany it. Well done and good luck too.
Melissa
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
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Well thank you so much! I greatly appreciate the number of stars, the review and the wishes!