Comment from
Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great interpretation, Mystery Author, using the required words. Your words create great imagery. I could see the 'things' you described in this well thought out poem. Good job and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
Thank you for the read and the encouraging words. Much appreciated.
Comment from
Earl Corp
I enjoyed this poem immensely.. It has most everything I look for in a poem. It makes sense, it entertains and it invokes emotions within the reader. You chose a very nice picture to accompany it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
Thank you for the read and the encouraging words. Much appreciated.