Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

I like your piece on the soul. Congrats for placing in the winners' circle. I would only point out that an interrogative sentence shouldn't follow a comma, but a semicolon or period.

Happy days.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019

Thank you for the review and insights, I'm still learning poetry types ect.., trying to Remember grammatical punctuation like commas and proper sentence structure.
Reviews and suggestions are Welcomed and Appreciated.
God Bless you

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

Beautiful poetry. I think that we all have life and death in our lives, but it's scary to think about death. I think that the poem is well written. This talks about three basic things in life. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest! Excellent poem!

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2018

Thank you for the review and insight,
God Bless you and have a great year-end Holiday season.

reply by Raul1 on 21-Dec-2018

You're welcome! Happy Holidays to you too! :)

reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018

God Bless you and your family
Thank you for the review and insight

reply by Raul1 on 25-Dec-2018

You're welcome

Comment from jmshumate

Excellent

Very good work. This is and excellent prose-poem contest entry. The only guarantee mankind has in life is death, but God offers more than the curse offers, Ge offers the promise of death being the entrance to life. Your words speak much wisdom, thank you for sharing this and good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2018

Thank you for the review and insightful inspirational response.
God Bless you and your family,
Happy Holidays, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and your family.