Comment from C. Gale Burnett

Excellent

This was absolutely beautiful. Your chosen colored background brought out the feeling of 'warmth' as written in your last four lines. The artwork you chose to illustrate your poem was both beautiful and stunning.
I love sunsets and warm nights, but this poem, with a different photo and changing the word 'sun', could also represent 'love'.
You are so creative ... I wish you the very best in the contest!! Very deserving :)

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2018

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Comment from jmshumate

Excellent

You did a good job describing ones live for a beautiful sunset, the kiss goodbye as it's warm rays linger in the sky going down. A very nice picture is painted for the reader here. Good job and thank you for sharing sharing this.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018

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Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I like the farewell kiss personificarion image.
And the essence of energy and warmth of the sun lingers well into the night.
Beautiful art work.
Well penned and good luck with the contest
God bless

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018

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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Romance with the sun is so intense, just a farewell kiss the sun could not forget, his warm essence continues to linger long into the night; well said, well done. Keep Writing, Keep Inspiring -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018

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