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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello rhonnie69
I read your little story of how Fi Fi was doggoned from watching a movie and found the book was much better There are times I felt the same way expecting the movie good as the book.
Gert
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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Hello rhonnie69
I read your little story of how Fi Fi was doggoned from watching a movie and found the book was much better There are times I felt the same way expecting the movie good as the book.
Gert
Comment Written 14-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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HI THERE GERT: Thank you for reading and reviewing my work here. You always give me good reviews. Thank you again for fostering my encouragement. You are truly a source of help for me. God bless you, Gert. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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You are welcome rhonnie69.
Have you read my poem yet the title is
Raining Pennies?
Gert
Comment from humpwhistle
Cute story. Has all the earmarks of a stand-up joke. Very creative.
Just out of curiosity, how did the lady know who the dog belonged to?
You might want to mix up your sentence structure some. Too many 'she (verb)' echoes.
Peace, Lee
She goes in to see a movie that has already began-- begun.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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Cute story. Has all the earmarks of a stand-up joke. Very creative.
Just out of curiosity, how did the lady know who the dog belonged to?
You might want to mix up your sentence structure some. Too many 'she (verb)' echoes.
Peace, Lee
She goes in to see a movie that has already began-- begun.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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HELLO LEE: Thank you for your help here. I've edited this work according to your suggestions. Yes...now it reads much better. Thank you, Lee. The lady knew who the dog belonged to because she was sitting next to her owner in the row just ahead. Thank you again, Lee. God bless. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A very good image and story, Rhonnie69.
-She looks like a FiFi!
-You set the scene very well.
-I like the description of the
dog's reactions to the different scenes.
-I like the humor at the end
when the owner mentions the book.
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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-A very good image and story, Rhonnie69.
-She looks like a FiFi!
-You set the scene very well.
-I like the description of the
dog's reactions to the different scenes.
-I like the humor at the end
when the owner mentions the book.
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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HELLO PAM: I thank you very much for reading and reviewing my work here. You are certainly appreciated. You've made me feel that my effort here was worth while. You've encouraged me greatly, Pam. I write for readers like you. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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You are very welcome and deserving, rhonnie69. I appreciate your reply, and am glad you felt encouraged by my review. All the best to you.
Comment from Earl Corp
That was a cool little story with a surprise ending. If this wasn't a contest entry it should be. The only thing is when I hear the name FiFi I think of a poodle, not the breed pictured.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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That was a cool little story with a surprise ending. If this wasn't a contest entry it should be. The only thing is when I hear the name FiFi I think of a poodle, not the breed pictured.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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HELLO EARL: I thank you for reading and reviewing my work here. When I heard the name, Fi Fi, I used to think of a poodle too. But every since the day I met this extremely attractive lady named, Fi Fi, I've had a change of mind. I was kind of thinking about, Fi Fi, when I was trying to think of a name for my puppy in my image here. Now-a-days, to me, the name Fi Fi, means any extremely attractive female. So...there...we have my image for my story. God bless, Earl. Cordially: rhonnie69.