Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

There's sadness in these words and dementia is a terrible affliction as we often live beyond our actual years and the mind does not keep up, a well written piece, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2018

Comment from phil nelson

Excellent

Excellent and chilling-dementia and alzheimer's are well portrayed here by you as locked doors with memories behind each one-very well written, almost suspenseful and definitely provocative of emotions, Good luck in the contest!

All the Best!
Phil

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2018