Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A very intriguing write that addresses the readers - the members of FanStory - directly and pulls them into your write with questions of imagining, when they were 18, what did they see themselves becoming....and then the sad ending of your son. A very poignant write, Doc -- thank you for sharing. :) :)

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2018

Thanks again
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

I found this piece to be interesting, love the way you use the Father, Son and Holy ghost in this piece. I haven't been on in some time, but plan on reviewing more my friend.
God bless
Steve

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2018

Happily Ever After Death?
Is not The End of the Beginning but the Beginning of The End!
Give Life!
Doctor Ricky1924

Comment from Zue65

Excellent

You definitely have a different style in writing that is uniquely your own. It reads like disjointed ramblings of mixed emotions.It is like reading a story in your mind in another mind. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2018

Thanks nassus 1957.
And next?
"Ashes to Ashes and Dust to Dust!"
Doctor Ricky1024