Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Sweet this is, Bill. i liked it and it's a worthy addition to your new series of poems dedicated to strange animals. I really enjoy to reading along. All the best, Ulla:))

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2018

Thanks, Ulla

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A fun little ditty -- can almost hear a group pre-schoolers or kindergartners singing it in a circle...! :) :) Delightful! :) Thanx for sharing this morning, sir! :) Yvette

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2018

Thanks, Yvette

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi Bill. This is very cute. I was thinking meol should be mealo. Because the lines end in illow not eol. Up to you
I am enjoying this series. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2018

Thanks, Pam

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. I guess you're the pro of made up words, Bill. Enjoyed the sounds of the poem and the regular meter and the outrageous rhymes. Keep up the creative work!

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2018

Thanks, lyenochka

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Thanks but no thanks, not my cup of tea, a little to salty for me. I don't imagine that I would have any teeth left if I were to try to take a bite out of that incredibly tough hide. I'll pass.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2018

Not everyone.

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

Everything tastes good with some picadillo. Im going to hate to see armadillos end, but you don't usually take them much further than six installments.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2018

I always try for ten, but sometimes a source just dries up.

Comment from Cass Carlton

Excellent

This is a very innovative way to describe the indescribable. What a quaint creature the armadillo is, with its armor plated hide and vacuum cleaner nose. Which only goes to show that some people will eat anything if they are hungry enough. cheers Cass

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2018

Thanks, Cass, for giving this a look.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Ha, another finely rhymed and metred treat from armadillo land. I was most fond of the jillo and marshomillow rhymes.

Always a treat to read your most innovative verse, Bill.

Gloria

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018

Thanks, Gloria

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Are they really dumb? But they're so darn cute, it doesn't matter! I'm sure it would be softer than a concrete pillow. Good invention of words. Delightful read.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018

Thanks, da

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Is this how you entertained your students? Excellent work with your fun rhymes. You can do just so much with an armadillo. I like your comparison to a concrete pillow and dumber than a marshomillow. Who could enjoy the taste? Great fun. judi

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 Comment Written 31-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018

I hear chicken tastes like armadillo... or was it chitlins?

reply by judiverse on 31-Oct-2018

I don't know. They say everything tastes like armadillo. judi