Comment from Lisa Heath

Good

Ricky this starts out to be a pretty scary poem. It is true, though to stay true to your mate, love your children and defend their honor with Christ's help not the devil's though. Lisa

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018

Whence tour Spose Gambles it all away and deceives..
Once the spouse bails out and takes get Life...
You become?
Ages to Ashes and Dust to Dust...
Do as You may and bond the Bond Of Trust?
There's more and of course this was not completed.
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Comment from dovemarie

Excellent

Dear Ricky, Your poems are hard to understand, but I get the feeling you're going through ups and downs, your language is startling and somewhat disgusting, but I think I can hear where you are coming from. Great picture too. Dove (Donna)

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018

Thanks.
There are warnings for things such as Language and Violence.
The words are not complete as there are stars for some of the letters.
Language can be leud but needed for effect.
Most understand.
I rarely use it in real life.
Thanks for understanding.
Doctor Ricky1024

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Ricky1024
Well your thoughts of "The Joining of Two, Separate Entities...
I can see the humor of how not being the same in thoughts don't agree with each other, you gave a good example all through your lessons
Gert

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018

Glad you enjoyed this one Gert.
Doctor Ricky1024

Comment from Cybertron1986

Excellent

The direct voice is presented very well here. It makes for a read that flows smoothly, and has a clarity that supplements both the humor in the story as well as the characteristics of the subjects. A very enjoyable and engaging read!

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018

Thanks Cybertron 1986.
This means the World to me.
Doctor Ricky
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