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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from frogbook
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Ha, now that is a funny and decidedly rare picture done justice by your far reaching imagination and eloquently placed words.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
    Thanks, FB
Comment from judiverse
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Wouldn't it be easier just to keep the wallaby outdoors? Cute picture of the little one with all that toilet paper. I'd say it would be a hopeless task to try to potty-train a wallaby. If you wanted to take him on an airplane, I suppose you'd have to try. Getting drunk after the process seems like a plan. judi

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
    Can?t be worst than training the grandkids.
Comment from nomi338
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Yeah, and the hardest part would probably be teaching him not to eat the paper either before or after wiping. Ugh! Not everybody is averse to eating poop. Sorry about that. Sometimes I forget myself and keep things too real.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
    I?m busy potty training our grandkids now. I?ve seen a lot of horrible things, but a twenty pound kid with thirty pound dumps is mind boggling
Comment from Gloria ....
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Haaaaaaaaaa, that little rascal. He found the toilet paper and unrolled it, yeesh.

I love your prankas, Bill and this one is really cute too.

Gloria

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
    Thank you, Gloria
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol. Oh dear. I can't even imagine. Or perhaps baby wallabies like to play with toilet paper? I think my grandcat does wreck some havoc in the bathroom. Thanks for the chuckles.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
    Thanks, lyenochka
Comment from Earl Corp
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Good one with a cool picture to match it. This is probably your second best Wallaby poem. Somehow I missed Wallaby six. Good job keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Earl.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Oh, Bill, you have NO IDEA how much I needed this laugh just now -- suffice to say, I am very grateful for both the photo and your words...I think I'll go with the parting line! :) :) Take care and thanx for sharing! :) :) Yvette

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
    Glad I could help, Yvette.
Comment from phill doran
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Ho Bill
These are phenomenally improbable poems you keep putting out - pranka indeed - but I do read them and I find them very funny. I mention this as I don't comment on them all - but know that I read and enjoy them.
I wish you well with your writing: I enjoyed the 'taxidermist' too.
Cheers
phill


 Comment Written 12-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Phil.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very cute pranka poem you have penned about the baby Wallaby getting into the toilet paper. You used very cute words and very cute imagery with the picture! I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Teri.