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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from nomi338
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This wallaby has just got to be the first animal in history who has a desire to be, something more that what it was born to be. In other words it is a true wanna be. Since it is quite a sight to see, it does not need to be anything more than what it was born to be.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
    I see
Comment from Gloria ....
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Now that is the cutest little animal I've seen in about five minutes, and what a terrific poem to go with it. I suspect they kick pretty good though, so it's admiration from a distance.

Great job, Bill. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Gloria
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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He he he, you made me smile Bill with this write! A geat play on words and those kangaroos look so cute and move so fast too! Best wishes, Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Dollyj
Comment from lyenochka
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Fun one, Bill! I like all the sounds in this poem - the "oo" and the "ee" rhymes and the alliteration of 'w's. Good choice of animal - cute and a little less well known.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
    Thanks, lyenochka.
Comment from Boogienights
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They look like kangaroos! This is really cute, but I'm pondering now...what's the difference between the two? Google, here I come! Interesting choice of animal, I'm excited to see where this goes.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
    Thanks, BN. I think the wallaby is smaller and can be a pet.
Comment from Sally Law
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Adorable. My granddaughter will love this photo as well. This is probably the best close-up picture of a wallaby I've ever seen. (Of course, I have to magnify everything I read by 100 percent.) It went well with your Aussie poetry.
All the best,
Sally

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Sally.
Comment from Teri7
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I think that these are so cute and adorable. You used such cute words in the poem and very lovely imagery from the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings Teri

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Teri
Comment from Tina Crute
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This is so darn cute! I can see kids at school saying this! You know how they like to say poo....You composed it very cleverly! Great poem! We don't see enough funny on here, so thanks!

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Tina.
reply by Tina Crute on 09-Oct-2018
    Welcome!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Well, now there's an interesting approach...makes the reader really look forward to the format of the rest of the wallabies...could prove to be interesting!! :) :) Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette :)

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
    Someone requested this guy. I think they?re from Australia.