Arr-kee-all-oh-gee
abecedarian about archaeology11 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This abecedarian poem, Arr-kee-all-oh-gee, follows the twenty-six letters through this acrostic and finds the fun in digging up the past. Nice rhyme placements.
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This abecedarian poem, Arr-kee-all-oh-gee, follows the twenty-six letters through this acrostic and finds the fun in digging up the past. Nice rhyme placements.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2018
Comment from BeasPeas
Being a history lover, I appreciate your wonderful ABCedarian on archaeology. Treasures from the past excite us all, set the imagination full speed. Nicely done and much luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
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Being a history lover, I appreciate your wonderful ABCedarian on archaeology. Treasures from the past excite us all, set the imagination full speed. Nicely done and much luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 09-Oct-2018
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written abecderian poem about archeology and what it all is about, seartching for artifacts in the dirt and under the ocean to see how old our mother earth could be.
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A very well-written abecderian poem about archeology and what it all is about, seartching for artifacts in the dirt and under the ocean to see how old our mother earth could be.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2018
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed reading your Abecedarian contest entry.
Your enthusiasm for Archeology shines through each line.
You make it sound like fun and not drudgery at all.
The lines flow well, and I like the addition of rhyme which is
not always easy to do with this form.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
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I enjoyed reading your Abecedarian contest entry.
Your enthusiasm for Archeology shines through each line.
You make it sound like fun and not drudgery at all.
The lines flow well, and I like the addition of rhyme which is
not always easy to do with this form.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 08-Oct-2018
Comment from Mark Valentine
This is the second post about archeology I've read I the last two days - nust be something in the air.
Running the table on the alphabet is hard enough, but you do it with rhymes - impressive (viceless and priceless - my personal favorite) and you get creative with "x".
Most impressively, you didn't sacrifice coherence or message in crafting this - like the other archeology poem I read (I wish I could remember who wrote it) this poem shines a light on just how cool that science is. Nice.
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This is the second post about archeology I've read I the last two days - nust be something in the air.
Running the table on the alphabet is hard enough, but you do it with rhymes - impressive (viceless and priceless - my personal favorite) and you get creative with "x".
Most impressively, you didn't sacrifice coherence or message in crafting this - like the other archeology poem I read (I wish I could remember who wrote it) this poem shines a light on just how cool that science is. Nice.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2018
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very cleverly written poem about archaeology. It sounds like such an interesting pastime. Great imagery. I wish you lots of luck In the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
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This is a very cleverly written poem about archaeology. It sounds like such an interesting pastime. Great imagery. I wish you lots of luck In the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2018
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Digging up bones of the past is a wonderful topic to write about. I enjoyed reading your abecedarian poem. Your descriptions from A-Z about archeology were well-written. I wish you lots of luck in the contest.
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Digging up bones of the past is a wonderful topic to write about. I enjoyed reading your abecedarian poem. Your descriptions from A-Z about archeology were well-written. I wish you lots of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2018
Comment from poetwatch
Good free verse poem using the alphabet, making it a great Abecdarian Poem. Archaeology is something I always wanted to do. Digging into ones pass is reveling the truth of what they were and what they did. Thank you for sharing your walk through the world.
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Good free verse poem using the alphabet, making it a great Abecdarian Poem. Archaeology is something I always wanted to do. Digging into ones pass is reveling the truth of what they were and what they did. Thank you for sharing your walk through the world.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2018
Comment from fm wright
A beautifully written Abecdarian poem. It not only flows well but also informs. It's easy to read. I also like the picture accompanying it. A wonderful entry for the contest. I wish the best for you with it.
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A beautifully written Abecdarian poem. It not only flows well but also informs. It's easy to read. I also like the picture accompanying it. A wonderful entry for the contest. I wish the best for you with it.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2018
Comment from tfawcus
An Abecdarian Poem that actually tells a cohesive story - now there's an achievement! This flows very well and also maintains a pleasing rhythm for the most part. Just a couple of suggestions that might help separate the lines better, without a hanging connector...
"something that (the)
Kings of the past"
and
"etched in stone (their)
Rules to abide"
I enjoyed your phonetic title - quite an eye-catcher!
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An Abecdarian Poem that actually tells a cohesive story - now there's an achievement! This flows very well and also maintains a pleasing rhythm for the most part. Just a couple of suggestions that might help separate the lines better, without a hanging connector...
"something that (the)
Kings of the past"
and
"etched in stone (their)
Rules to abide"
I enjoyed your phonetic title - quite an eye-catcher!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
