Comment from frogbook

Excellent

Love this picture and a perfect story written about it. It read in a melody like a song, very lilting and sweet. And always that bit of word play!

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018

Thanks, FB

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

Cool beans, you took my suggestion! Grizzly's are absolutely the coolest animals in the animal kingdom. You graphic is cool and I love the message the poem sends. Nice Job!

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018

Thank you, Earl, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written and very cute short poem about the two bears looking like one wants to eat the other's snout! You used very good words and very cute imagery from the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018

Thanks, Teri

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Ah yeah. What can be more sexy than frenzied fish breath followed by doing the nasty wild bear style. Um, um, um! My oh my, just what I would like to see in my mind and reference next time I engage in rolling in the hay.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018

Instead of frisky you can get grizzly.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A fun poetry write focused on bears to an unfamiliar rhyme scheme, but one that delivers both a smile and a strong 'proseaic' presentation. :) :) Thank you for sharing. :) Yvette

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018

Thanks, Yvette

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

LOL! Hibermating!! Loved that song, it went superbly with that picture. I do enjoy reading your bear poems, it's a good way to show what wonderful creatures they are. Well done, my friend. :) Sandra x

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018

Thanks, Sandra

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. So that's what they're doing. Looks much more dangerous than "hibermating." I get this feeling that you've invented new lyrics to a well-known song but alas, I'm hopeless with pop culture.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2018

They?re just big teddy rip-you-to-pieceses.

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

Hahaha..I read these out of order..I didnt know you had already wrote about Grizzlies. Fantastic. Once again I'm really enjoying these bear poems!!!!!

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2018

Thank you, BN

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your bear poem, Bill. Your words + picture go together nicely. I like the play on the word hibernating. It all works well. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2018

Thanks, Jan