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Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "Death of Love"Eclectic style
8 total reviews
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Trisha,
Wow. The three-lines of this poetic form is full of meaning. The hurt and confusion are apparent, along with the death of a love. Abuse, of any kind, should never be tolerated, and though it hurts to walk away - self-preservation is so important.
~MP~
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018
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Hi, Trisha,
Wow. The three-lines of this poetic form is full of meaning. The hurt and confusion are apparent, along with the death of a love. Abuse, of any kind, should never be tolerated, and though it hurts to walk away - self-preservation is so important.
~MP~
Comment Written 01-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018
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I agree it?s either low self worth or stupidity that perpetuates the fear cycle. Thanks for your kind review
Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Kelly Hanna
A darker piece. I enjoyed the presentation. It fit the poem really well. The word carnal always grabs me. It just sounds severe to me. So I enjoyed the idea of carnal passion. That it was killed by someones abuse at the end, made the poem memorable. Well done.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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A darker piece. I enjoyed the presentation. It fit the poem really well. The word carnal always grabs me. It just sounds severe to me. So I enjoyed the idea of carnal passion. That it was killed by someones abuse at the end, made the poem memorable. Well done.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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Thanks so much Kelly
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dawnya
It's been a tough week. You've expressed yourself well. It is hard to attempt to reach out to others once abuse has entered one's life. Unfortunately, it kills more than love and passion.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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It's been a tough week. You've expressed yourself well. It is hard to attempt to reach out to others once abuse has entered one's life. Unfortunately, it kills more than love and passion.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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That?s true, thanks very much
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from poetwatch
Nice picture, Bucketlist! Death is always a destroyer of emotions. Yet, if you can express it with words written in a time of heartache... you defeated Death, for your emotions stir the readers with love. This is a good 3 Line Poetry Contest entry. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
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Nice picture, Bucketlist! Death is always a destroyer of emotions. Yet, if you can express it with words written in a time of heartache... you defeated Death, for your emotions stir the readers with love. This is a good 3 Line Poetry Contest entry. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
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Than you very much for your insightful review
.Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
A very poignant three lines of poetry! Your line, before abuse killed them" is a powerful one. The photo you chose is also fitting and adds to the emotional turmoil of the piece. Well-written account of romance ending badly.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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A very poignant three lines of poetry! Your line, before abuse killed them" is a powerful one. The photo you chose is also fitting and adds to the emotional turmoil of the piece. Well-written account of romance ending badly.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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Fangs to you! This was actually true for me. I appreciate your review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from damommy
Very good presentation to enhance your sad words. I would certainly think abuse of any kind would kill what love there was. It wouldn't take long, either.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
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Very good presentation to enhance your sad words. I would certainly think abuse of any kind would kill what love there was. It wouldn't take long, either.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
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Thanks
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from kiwijenny
Who are the them? Inquiring minds want to know. By the picture the them are organs.
Eek my mind went a crazy place ...abuse does that
Scary poem when your mind wanders and wonders
God bless
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2018
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Who are the them? Inquiring minds want to know. By the picture the them are organs.
Eek my mind went a crazy place ...abuse does that
Scary poem when your mind wanders and wonders
God bless
Comment Written 30-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2018
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?The them? refers back to the love and the passion! Sorrry you went to a crazy place. I have 50 years of That!Thanks so much for your kind view, I hope your enquiring mind can rest now LOL
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Very sad words and I can identify with them, I have known the mental cruelty of an abusive lover and it kills all the love in the end, so true Trisha, a well written piece so well presented too, albeit sad, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
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Very sad words and I can identify with them, I have known the mental cruelty of an abusive lover and it kills all the love in the end, so true Trisha, a well written piece so well presented too, albeit sad, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
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For me it was reality too. I?m always grateful for your review
Hugs, Trisha