Comment from Lady Jane

Excellent

Yes, her breath is cold as ice and invites the warmth of a nice, hot log on fire! Hot cocoa and a cozy blanket, too, I might add. You've captured the soul of winter well here in this short write. It's presented beautifully with nice form and image was great also. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Janelle

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2018

A most encouraging review -thanks for reading zanya

Comment from Annika Fiercely

Excellent

This is really beautiful; a lovely glimmer into winter. It's a good use of the haiku and goes really wonderfully with the image you selected as well. Very wintry, well done.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2018

I like that expressive word 'glimmer' thanks for reading and critique zanya

Comment from Wabigoon

Excellent

Have to give a five due to "Winter's Breatn." I figured that isn't what you meant -- but, hey, keep an eye out! And, how about "crackling inspiration" or just plain "inspiration" instead of "log fires?"

Best
Wabigoon/Jeff

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2018

Thanks for reading zanya

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

I like this. In your short verse you convey the essence of personification by using breath. And that is what it is...windy, cold stirring breath. Well done and good luck.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2018

Thanks for reading and encouraging review zanya