Comment from Lady Jane

Excellent

"Today(,) girls and boys(,) we're going to learn about Pirates."

Haha. That is a clever girl. Man, our ears of corn have been off the charts expensive here in WA! Nice image, good dialogue, and carefully chosen words make this a fun, refreshing read. Short of the one nit above, which I will not dock a star for, I think this was excellently presented. Keep writing.
Janelle

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2018

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Haha, this is a good one, rhonnie. I enjoyed it & got a laugh. Your lines flow smoothly. I like the conclusion & can easily see how a young kid would say that. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2018

Comment from LeftHandedScribe

Excellent

Just delightful! You capture believeable dialogue with both the teacher and the students. As well, each student has a very distinctive voice and personality. The photo is precious!

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2018

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

LOL, Rhonnie, this is funny. I've never heard it before and I would have to admit a buck for an ear of corn is awfully expensive.

Got a good laugh from me so many thanks for sharing.

Gloria

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2018