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A Witty Ditty Anthology

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Comment from Gert sherwood
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Oh yes I think I get it correct me if I'm wrong; one can not take voyage unless they have boat
is there a reason for the author's last name being Camel
Gert

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
    HELLO GERT SHERWOOD: First of all, I've missed you, my pen-pal fan. I've tried to contact you, but somehow my computer won't let me. I humbly thank you for your help here. I needed it. I've changed the word, VOYAGE, to JOURNEY. You were right. I've learned from your correction here, that I must be more careful how I use my thesaurus in choosing synonyms. As for the author's last name being, "CAMEL," it was intended to be a childish pun on the subject that would amuse a kid. I am a children's writer whose writing tends to seem a little childish. Often adults ask me what something I wrote meant. Kids know. They often say that I write, "Mad Cool." They tell me that they like it. It makes them ditch their electronic distractions long enough to read wholesome "FUN," literature. That is my goal. Thank you for being my friend. I respect you, dear lady. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by Gert sherwood on 28-Jul-2018
    You are welcome rhonnie69
    I'm among the the reviewers who like to read fun and down to earth writing
    rhonnie, if you desire to read my writings
    all you need to do is check the Fan list
    Smiles Gert
Comment from kiwijenny
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A Book just Written:

"Voyage Across The Desert."
by Rhoda Camel.
He he he ...bad puns are how eye roll ...too
Great I love this
God bless


 Comment Written 27-Jul-2018

Comment from LeftHandedScribe
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Clever! A very creative use of both color and language. As short as some of these poems are, I find it fascinating how a story can still be told with care to meter and tone.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
    SHAUNA: I'm here again. Thank you for using your time to view my work. You've given me many reasons to be grateful for you.
    And I'm grateful. You make me a better writer. It takes a good writer to know a good writer. Keep writing, good writer. Cordially: rhonnie69.