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Comment from donette1914
lol this is way too funny!!! nice photo that should last awhile.
It was a pleasure to read such outstanding work and this is so well penned. thank you for sharing donette1914 july 8 2018
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2018
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lol this is way too funny!!! nice photo that should last awhile.
It was a pleasure to read such outstanding work and this is so well penned. thank you for sharing donette1914 july 8 2018
Comment Written 18-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2018
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Thank you, Donette, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Dawn Munro
LOL. I don't know where you find these strange pictures, but they're perfect for your off-the-beaten-track thinking when it comes to some of your poems and stories, Bill. Very original, and very amusing. :)) Nice use of unusual words for end rhyme too. Well done, IMO.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2018
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LOL. I don't know where you find these strange pictures, but they're perfect for your off-the-beaten-track thinking when it comes to some of your poems and stories, Bill. Very original, and very amusing. :)) Nice use of unusual words for end rhyme too. Well done, IMO.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2018
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Thanks, Dawn, for the nice review. Bill
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You're very welcome.
Comment from judiverse
Weird combination. My husband likes the drumstick, so he could really indulge with that crossing. How the riddle will be "Why did the chicken cross the road? He wanted some elephant ears." Excellent rhyme in this. Fun poem. I can't see much future in these kinds of research. judi
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2018
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Weird combination. My husband likes the drumstick, so he could really indulge with that crossing. How the riddle will be "Why did the chicken cross the road? He wanted some elephant ears." Excellent rhyme in this. Fun poem. I can't see much future in these kinds of research. judi
Comment Written 18-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2018
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Good stuff. What do you call an elephant that flies? An elephant fly.
Comment from nomi338
This brings to mind oanother of my favorites sex stories, a flea was having sex with an elephant, the elephant bumped a coconut tress and a coconut fell hitting her on the head, it hurt and she let out an oh, at which the overconfident flea said, "sorry babe was I too rough?"
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2018
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This brings to mind oanother of my favorites sex stories, a flea was having sex with an elephant, the elephant bumped a coconut tress and a coconut fell hitting her on the head, it hurt and she let out an oh, at which the overconfident flea said, "sorry babe was I too rough?"
Comment Written 18-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2018
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That sounds like one of my old buddies and a working girl from Puerto Rico.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hell yeah, Bill!
Just imagine the drumstick on that bad boy!
I always heard the melding of these two critters told in the following fashion.
Question: What do you get when you cross an elephant with a rhinoceros?
I dunno--whaddaya get?
Answer: El-if-I-know (Elephino).
Good stuff.
Tastes like chicken...
~Dean :)
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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Hell yeah, Bill!
Just imagine the drumstick on that bad boy!
I always heard the melding of these two critters told in the following fashion.
Question: What do you get when you cross an elephant with a rhinoceros?
I dunno--whaddaya get?
Answer: El-if-I-know (Elephino).
Good stuff.
Tastes like chicken...
~Dean :)
Comment Written 17-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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Thanks, Dean. Don?t get me started on elephant jokes. Too late. What has four legs, is covered with wool, and goes ?baa baa baa??
An elephant wearing a wool sweater and singing the Woofenpoof song. *
*. ?We?re poor little lambs who?ve lost our way...baa baa baa.
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Hahahaha...
Comment from Spitfire
Which came first-- the pictures or the poem? I hate the idea of cross breeding. The result could be a very flawed animal.
Use of alliteration with m, s, and t sounds and assonance with bring and mingling.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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Which came first-- the pictures or the poem? I hate the idea of cross breeding. The result could be a very flawed animal.
Use of alliteration with m, s, and t sounds and assonance with bring and mingling.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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I was going to do elephants, then I found all these pictures of elephinos. Two for one.
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I would have liked to see who humped who. LOL
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
haha where would one cook that chicken? Good job, Bill, with your fun poem--great rhymes, smooth flow, perfect picture, & overall just fun to read. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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haha where would one cook that chicken? Good job, Bill, with your fun poem--great rhymes, smooth flow, perfect picture, & overall just fun to read. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 17-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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Thanks, Jan
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Just think of all the people that could be fed with a drum stick like that! Fun poem, Makes one think of all the strange combination there could be. Some we really don't want to think about. =} Rox
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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Just think of all the people that could be fed with a drum stick like that! Fun poem, Makes one think of all the strange combination there could be. Some we really don't want to think about. =} Rox
Comment Written 17-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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Thanks, Roxanna, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from kiwijenny
He he he ...but if that chicelephant laid an egg...what would that omlelephant taste like look like ...and what if you crossed a zebra with a giraffe...a ziraffe. Would you get a laugh? Would they stick their neck out?
What's next a frogodile? Allisnakeator 'when will it end?
God bless
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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He he he ...but if that chicelephant laid an egg...what would that omlelephant taste like look like ...and what if you crossed a zebra with a giraffe...a ziraffe. Would you get a laugh? Would they stick their neck out?
What's next a frogodile? Allisnakeator 'when will it end?
God bless
Comment Written 16-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Thanks, Jenny, for getting into the spirit of the thing.
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He he he
Comment from Cass Carlton
Said the lion to his mate
"I'll go get supper 'fore its late
We have six cubs that all eat flesh
I'll bring home something nice and fresh"
Off he went and made a kill
Then just as he would eat his fill
Another beast came strolling by
With rhino skin and elephant's eye.
Sir Lion looked and was amazed.
He seemed, in fact, a little dazed
The creature grinned and walked away
No-one would dine on him today.
Lion went home to cubs and mate
And apologized for being late
He said " This food is finger lickin'
But I've just seen a Mother of a chicken"
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Said the lion to his mate
"I'll go get supper 'fore its late
We have six cubs that all eat flesh
I'll bring home something nice and fresh"
Off he went and made a kill
Then just as he would eat his fill
Another beast came strolling by
With rhino skin and elephant's eye.
Sir Lion looked and was amazed.
He seemed, in fact, a little dazed
The creature grinned and walked away
No-one would dine on him today.
Lion went home to cubs and mate
And apologized for being late
He said " This food is finger lickin'
But I've just seen a Mother of a chicken"
Comment Written 16-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Neat poem in response to this one. Thanks for the exceptional grade.