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Comment from BeasPeas
Oh, these poor animals. Torture by write! Poor little fellas. However, your themes regarding the various animals, I must say, are clever. Keeps me wondering what's next. Marilyn
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Oh, these poor animals. Torture by write! Poor little fellas. However, your themes regarding the various animals, I must say, are clever. Keeps me wondering what's next. Marilyn
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thanks, M@rilyn
Comment from nomi338
Anyone foolish enough to hold an animal as excitable as a Gerbil in their laps deserve to be pooped on. Look at that thing while he is in his cage or not at all is what I say. I don't choose to look at him at all, looks to much like a rat to me anyways..
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Anyone foolish enough to hold an animal as excitable as a Gerbil in their laps deserve to be pooped on. Look at that thing while he is in his cage or not at all is what I say. I don't choose to look at him at all, looks to much like a rat to me anyways..
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thanks, nomi, for giving the gerbil a kook.
Comment from judiverse
They probably don't need much encouragement to defecate on someone's lap. Why would you be passing a gerbil around, anyway? Shouldn't it be on its wheel? Smooth work with your acrostic. I hope the gerbils have appreciated having the spotlight shone on them. judi
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They probably don't need much encouragement to defecate on someone's lap. Why would you be passing a gerbil around, anyway? Shouldn't it be on its wheel? Smooth work with your acrostic. I hope the gerbils have appreciated having the spotlight shone on them. judi
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thanks, Judi. Th3 gerbils are mum.
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from Gloria ....
HAHA. Yes, by all means let's use Mister Gerbil to pass our passive aggressive dislike on to our chemistry professor. LOL.
Great job, Bill. No one has the dead pan humour that you are so skilled with.
Gloria
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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HAHA. Yes, by all means let's use Mister Gerbil to pass our passive aggressive dislike on to our chemistry professor. LOL.
Great job, Bill. No one has the dead pan humour that you are so skilled with.
Gloria
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thanks, Gloria
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
haha! Thanks for the laugh. You acrostic is in great form, Bill. I like the way your used the red color for each 1st letter & capitalized each. Your words are funny & probably true. Thanks for sharing. Jan
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haha! Thanks for the laugh. You acrostic is in great form, Bill. I like the way your used the red color for each 1st letter & capitalized each. Your words are funny & probably true. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
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Thanks, Jan.
Comment from tfawcus
An amusing poem on the surface level but if taken metaphorically to describe a certain kind of person it becomes rather effective satire. I do have one person in mind, who shall remain nameless!
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An amusing poem on the surface level but if taken metaphorically to describe a certain kind of person it becomes rather effective satire. I do have one person in mind, who shall remain nameless!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thanks, Tony