Sunflowers
Poem 2/6/220 total reviews
Comment from phill doran
Hello Zanya
Very good. "Array" is an excellent word to use in this context, as is "unfurl" - very descriptive of the flower's apparent action.
I wish you well in your contest with this.
cheer
sphill
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2018
Hello Zanya
Very good. "Array" is an excellent word to use in this context, as is "unfurl" - very descriptive of the flower's apparent action.
I wish you well in your contest with this.
cheer
sphill
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2018
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Thanks for reading and engaging review zanya
Comment from miajaffri
Isn't it amazing how such few words can convey a message of summer. Wouldn't it be a memory to be standing in this field of summer sunflowers. Reminds me of the
idea in Wordsworth's poem about The Daffodils. His last two lines...And then my heart with pleasure fills, and dances with the daffodils is my very favorite one.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2018
Isn't it amazing how such few words can convey a message of summer. Wouldn't it be a memory to be standing in this field of summer sunflowers. Reminds me of the
idea in Wordsworth's poem about The Daffodils. His last two lines...And then my heart with pleasure fills, and dances with the daffodils is my very favorite one.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2018
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Most interesting review zanya
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I am an interesting person... Ha! Ha!
Comment from kahpot
"Unfurl summer" what a beautiful way of describing the coming of a season, this excellent poem gives the artwork wonderful vision of these words very well done, and best wishes for your competition****kahpot
"Unfurl summer" what a beautiful way of describing the coming of a season, this excellent poem gives the artwork wonderful vision of these words very well done, and best wishes for your competition****kahpot
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-6-2, Sunflowers, uses the ten syllables and this vivid picture image of sunflowers to lay out a yellow, thick road on which to travel to the Emerald Palace of summer. Nice.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
This 2-6-2, Sunflowers, uses the ten syllables and this vivid picture image of sunflowers to lay out a yellow, thick road on which to travel to the Emerald Palace of summer. Nice.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thanks for reading and review zanya
Comment from friartuck
A fine entry in the 2-6-2, good luck with it! I love to see the sunflowers when they finally open and bloom in the garden - And so do the birds! Thanks for posting it.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
A fine entry in the 2-6-2, good luck with it! I love to see the sunflowers when they finally open and bloom in the garden - And so do the birds! Thanks for posting it.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Yes aren't sunflowers exquisite -thanks for reading and review zanya
Comment from BeasPeas
Love this. I have a few growing in my backyard. They bring a feeling of optimism and joy. I've never seen a whole field of them, but looking at the photo I can imagine it. Great job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
Love this. I have a few growing in my backyard. They bring a feeling of optimism and joy. I've never seen a whole field of them, but looking at the photo I can imagine it. Great job. Marilyn
Comment Written 13-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thanks for those encouraging words zanya
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow, what wonderful imagery this tiny poem evokes! Oddly enough, I featured a sunflower in a photograph I took only this afternoon, too, in the stifling heat we're experiencing in Toronto lately. There must be something about the flower that shouts summer! Your poem sure does! Great ambiance.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
Wow, what wonderful imagery this tiny poem evokes! Oddly enough, I featured a sunflower in a photograph I took only this afternoon, too, in the stifling heat we're experiencing in Toronto lately. There must be something about the flower that shouts summer! Your poem sure does! Great ambiance.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Great review - much appreciated -are sunflowers simply superb ! zanya
Comment from Boogienights
Sunflowers! Are there any flowers more beautiful? I'm partial to them and what a stunning picture you paired with your words. I'm so happy you picked this for your 2-6-2 contest entry, it made my day.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
Sunflowers! Are there any flowers more beautiful? I'm partial to them and what a stunning picture you paired with your words. I'm so happy you picked this for your 2-6-2 contest entry, it made my day.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thanks for those sentiments - aren't sunflowers simply beautiful ! zanya
Comment from Angela Hayes
Good read, educational, interesting, well presented, creatively displayed, creative use of words, image of vibrant sunflowers spread out in a field, sunshine, careful selection of words to compliment the wonderful bloom.
Good Luck!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
Good read, educational, interesting, well presented, creatively displayed, creative use of words, image of vibrant sunflowers spread out in a field, sunshine, careful selection of words to compliment the wonderful bloom.
Good Luck!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thanks for taking time to read and for those encouraging words zanya
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You're welcome!
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's words are descriptive, creative and
colorful! I enjoyed reading this poem. The artwork is perfect
and compliments both the words and theme of this poem.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
Excellent Poem! The author's words are descriptive, creative and
colorful! I enjoyed reading this poem. The artwork is perfect
and compliments both the words and theme of this poem.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Great review zanya