GULBRANDR- God's Sword
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Hamish is a monster. I hope Joshua is alright and does manage to come to the meeting. Everyone will be so happy to see him again. Oh, he has a story to tell his people. :)) Loving this, my friend. :) Sandraxx
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2018
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Hamish is a monster. I hope Joshua is alright and does manage to come to the meeting. Everyone will be so happy to see him again. Oh, he has a story to tell his people. :)) Loving this, my friend. :) Sandraxx
Comment Written 07-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2018
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Thanks so much. =}
Comment from nancy_e_davis
So far so good. They need Joshua there to confirm what
Augdon has told them. He sent word for Joshua to come if he is able. I bet if he rode in on his pet dragon he would wow them. LOL Hamish is against it of course. He is afraid of losing control I bet. Good job. Nancy
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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So far so good. They need Joshua there to confirm what
Augdon has told them. He sent word for Joshua to come if he is able. I bet if he rode in on his pet dragon he would wow them. LOL Hamish is against it of course. He is afraid of losing control I bet. Good job. Nancy
Comment Written 01-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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You never know, Dyster just might make an appearance. =} Thanks so much. Rox
Comment from papa55mike
What a great build up chapter leading to the epic battle to come. This is very well written and I love the rich characters. This echoes back to the days of Conan the Barbarian. Best of luck!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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What a great build up chapter leading to the epic battle to come. This is very well written and I love the rich characters. This echoes back to the days of Conan the Barbarian. Best of luck!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 01-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much.
Comment from meeshu
it is really well written in a fast-paced style with a lot of action and not that much dialogue. which works with me as the story keeps moving. I will look forward for more, Rox............meeshu
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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it is really well written in a fast-paced style with a lot of action and not that much dialogue. which works with me as the story keeps moving. I will look forward for more, Rox............meeshu
Comment Written 01-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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Thank you Meeshu. =}
Comment from royowen
Well done Roxanna, good episode, Augdon has been trying recruit Joshua's kindred, Hamish is resisting, but when starts abusing his servant, Augdon intervenes. I like the way you've designed your story, including the awkwardness of allying the regions to resist the inevitable invasion, otherwise be driven into the sea, I like the way you tackle the interwoven politics and awkwardness of negotiations, good job, blessings, Ri
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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Well done Roxanna, good episode, Augdon has been trying recruit Joshua's kindred, Hamish is resisting, but when starts abusing his servant, Augdon intervenes. I like the way you've designed your story, including the awkwardness of allying the regions to resist the inevitable invasion, otherwise be driven into the sea, I like the way you tackle the interwoven politics and awkwardness of negotiations, good job, blessings, Ri
Comment Written 01-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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Thanks so much Roy. =}
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Most welcome Rox