Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5, Daisy Bouquet, has the proper seventeen syllable set up and paints an adorable picture of a little person handing over some hand-picked daisies. Nice.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018

Thanks for the review. I was hoping a few readers could relate to this simple joy. Cheers, j

Comment from LaFrance

Excellent

Your 5-7-5 poem entry was great. It met all the contest requirements. I enjoyed your poem it was a nice refreshing reading that took me to a pleasant place.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018

Thanks for the review. I was hoping a few readers would relate to this simple joy. Cheers, j

Comment from Brigitte Elko

Excellent

I can't count the times when I was presented daisies and dandelions by chubby little hands. The feeling of these gifts have left their pollen in my memories. very well penned and good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Brigitte

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018

Thanks for the thoughtful review. I was hoping a few readers would relate to this simple joy. Pollen in my memories, cute. Cheers, j

reply by Brigitte Elko on 22-Jun-2018

My pleasure to read.
brigitte

Comment from Deirdre Anne Gialamas

Excellent

Dear Writer,
In so few words, as required, you created a very vivid, tangible little moment in life. Could almost smell the daisies in the child's enthusiastic hands coming to present them to perhaps a grandparent or parent.
Warm wishes,
Deirdre Anne

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018

Thanks for the the thoughtful review. I was hoping a few readers could relate to this simple joy. Cheers, j

Comment from TPAC

Excellent

Sweet viewpoint with features defining the true aspect of this presented flower essence. Write able to stand on its own even without picture. A true accomplishment of given restrictions in my opinion.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018

Thanks for the thoughtful review. I am still presenting pollen laden daisies to my mom after all these years.. Cheers, j

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

A sweet 5/7/5 poem for the contest. I love daisies and they are blooming all around my house right now.
I especially liked the last line.

Well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018

Thanks for the review Janet, I was hoping this simple joy would relate to a few readers. Cheers, have a nice weekend, j