Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

You describe the antics of these lovable cartoon characters so well. Great use of onomatopoeia. The question at the end had me thinking how cartoons have changed and not for the better.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018

Thanks, Shari, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for introducing me to the 9X9 form and adding the clever cartoon. I enjoyed your playful "nickel" analogy and use of sound. Enjoy the first Sunday of summer- Joan

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018

Thanks, Joan

Comment from brenda faye curtis

Excellent

I'm not sure where they are either, but I wish they were back on TV. Cartoons were so much better when they weren't educational or "p.c."

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018

Thanks, Brenda. Full episodes on YouTube.

reply by brenda faye curtis on 26-Jun-2018

You welcome, Bill, and thanks for the info!

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

I love Roadrunner and Wiley Coyote. Those were entertaining cartoons. I do have to say I admire that the coyote never gave up, even though we all knew he couldn't win. That roadrunner certainly was crafty to outwit him every time.

I like your nine syllables and nine lines. It is a creative and enjoyable read.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018

Thanks, Debi

Comment from pbomar1115

Excellent

Bill this is Brilliant. I like the exact wording. They fit perfectly, expressing the chase that I always enjoy seeing. Although I felt sorry for the coyote, I thought the roadrunner was too cool.

Phillip

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018

Thanks, Phillip

reply by pbomar1115 on 22-Jun-2018

You're welcome, Bill.

Phillip

Comment from Ginnygray

Excellent

Poor little coyote, just doesn't have the stopping power as the roadrunner. I wonder about the comparison of the brain and who has the smarter judgement skills or maybe I should say survivor skills. You are always so clever when it comes to interesting subjects in your writings. I enjoyed the read!

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018

Thanks, Ginny

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Bill, I've always liked the roadrunner, Appeals to one level of my sense of humour and always make me laugh. Yeah, God knows where they are now! I liked your poem a lot. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018

Thanks, Ulla

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

It was a fun strategy to bring in those cartoon sounds like Ka-Pow! A lot of people love chase scenes, although I'm not fond of them. Young people today want even more excitement that those Warner Brothers characters provided. Excellent rhyme and flow in this. Everything works well. judi

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018

Thanks, Judi.

reply by judiverse on 20-Jun-2018

You're welcome. judi

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

there is little doubt, the chase continues apace, the coyote continues to lose this race. What a schmuck, always out of luck, spends his hard earned bucks, Gadgets never work, his schemes always backfire, he needs to find an expert bird assassin for hire.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018

This could be roadrunner World 10

reply by nomi338 on 20-Jun-2018

OK. Do your thing.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-I really like the artwork and poem, Bill.
-It is nice to see humor on FS, and roadrunner
is a great character to use!
-I like the rhyme, vivid examples, as well
as the inclusion of the cartoon expression.
-The last line is a good ending, too.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018

Thanks, Pam, for the great review. Bill

reply by Pam (respa) on 20-Jun-2018

You are very welcome, Bill.