What Breaks My Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Choking Back the Tears"Poems and stories tellin' it like I see it.
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Comment from meeshu
this is a wonderful work, it flows as tears onto my lover's pen. sorry. although the line with the corncob just doesn't fit the whimsical feel. I might suggest "all power in your voice they rob" and the rhyme word > daub < is still out there..
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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this is a wonderful work, it flows as tears onto my lover's pen. sorry. although the line with the corncob just doesn't fit the whimsical feel. I might suggest "all power in your voice they rob" and the rhyme word > daub < is still out there..
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Might take you up on your suggestion of changing it. Do appreciate your rating. Thanks.
Comment from kiwijenny
I like this emotional poem...tears come no matter how you try to stop them,
I applaud the rhyme choices..cheek speak...cob sob
It's funny isn't it that tears come equally for joy or sadness,
Great picture
God bless
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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I like this emotional poem...tears come no matter how you try to stop them,
I applaud the rhyme choices..cheek speak...cob sob
It's funny isn't it that tears come equally for joy or sadness,
Great picture
God bless
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much for your rating and words of encouragement