Alluring Dreams Unfold
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Comment from kiwijenny
My husband had a knee replacement on Monday. I can empathize with you and your hip. I'm so glad you are up to writing beautiful poetry
Well penned
God bless.
reply by the author on 17-May-2018
My husband had a knee replacement on Monday. I can empathize with you and your hip. I'm so glad you are up to writing beautiful poetry
Well penned
God bless.
Comment Written 17-May-2018
reply by the author on 17-May-2018
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Thanks for the comments.
Hope your husband recovers as well as I am doing. Knee is harder I understand but many are done today as well. Welcome to the robot generation.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-I am glad you are doing well, and
sharing all of your special magical fairy poems, Dan.
-I like how you combine the aspects of the fairies
with what you have been going through.
-This is done very well in verse two,
as well as the conclusion.
reply by the author on 17-May-2018
-Nice image and presentation.
-I am glad you are doing well, and
sharing all of your special magical fairy poems, Dan.
-I like how you combine the aspects of the fairies
with what you have been going through.
-This is done very well in verse two,
as well as the conclusion.
Comment Written 17-May-2018
reply by the author on 17-May-2018
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Thanks for the comments.
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You are welcome.
Comment from rspoet
This is another fine fairy poem
perhaps they sprinkled some of their fairy dust upon you
to help you heal quickly, so you can once more walk in the park
Excellent photograph to match your words
Best wishes to you
RS
reply by the author on 17-May-2018
This is another fine fairy poem
perhaps they sprinkled some of their fairy dust upon you
to help you heal quickly, so you can once more walk in the park
Excellent photograph to match your words
Best wishes to you
RS
Comment Written 17-May-2018
reply by the author on 17-May-2018
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Thanks for the comments.
Comment from karenina
How great to hear your recovery is swift and sure! Your poetry sings of new hope and a bright future and I am sure I speak for all of your poet friends here when I say
thank God, the Divine Healer, for hearing our prayers! What a magical joyful poem!
Karenina
reply by the author on 17-May-2018
How great to hear your recovery is swift and sure! Your poetry sings of new hope and a bright future and I am sure I speak for all of your poet friends here when I say
thank God, the Divine Healer, for hearing our prayers! What a magical joyful poem!
Karenina
Comment Written 17-May-2018
reply by the author on 17-May-2018
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Thanks for the comments.
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Keep up the rehab!
Comment from writerjen
Very creative poem, good imagery and descriptive language. Good rhyme, too. Especially liked, Slowly the Fairies shimmer, Fragile creatures of purest beauty
Find the change so complete, Marvel that again the muse can sing'. Perfect picture to accompany this poem, too. Didn't take away from the overall meaning. Good luck with your recovery from surgery.
reply by the author on 17-May-2018
Very creative poem, good imagery and descriptive language. Good rhyme, too. Especially liked, Slowly the Fairies shimmer, Fragile creatures of purest beauty
Find the change so complete, Marvel that again the muse can sing'. Perfect picture to accompany this poem, too. Didn't take away from the overall meaning. Good luck with your recovery from surgery.
Comment Written 17-May-2018
reply by the author on 17-May-2018
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Thanks for the comments.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Alluring Dreams Unfold", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 17-May-2018
"Alluring Dreams Unfold", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 17-May-2018
reply by the author on 17-May-2018
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Thanks for the comments.
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danpaid, as always, you're very welcome.
Take care, God bless you and best wishes,
the Duchess
Comment from Swampfox1
What a world that would be where dreams come true. Fairies real and being seen by all, wow! "Fragile creatures of purest beauty" . The only thing I question is as to why the fairies are doing such things. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
What a world that would be where dreams come true. Fairies real and being seen by all, wow! "Fragile creatures of purest beauty" . The only thing I question is as to why the fairies are doing such things. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-May-2018
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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Thanks for the comments.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Dan,
I have read of your recent challenges, and I surely appreciate that you are able to put said challenges into poetic verse. More importantly, I am so pleased that you are on your way to living pain-free. Your verse is gentle and filled with optimism:
My favorite stanza:
The world of pain now behind
Moving to dreams with strides
Touching the realms of nature
Beauty captured in its unfolding
Best Wishes and thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
Hello Dan,
I have read of your recent challenges, and I surely appreciate that you are able to put said challenges into poetic verse. More importantly, I am so pleased that you are on your way to living pain-free. Your verse is gentle and filled with optimism:
My favorite stanza:
The world of pain now behind
Moving to dreams with strides
Touching the realms of nature
Beauty captured in its unfolding
Best Wishes and thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 16-May-2018
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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Thanks for the comments.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Wow! So glad you are feeling better every day. This is a lovely poem to help aid you in your journey to getting completely well. I love that you mention you will soon walk in the park and search for a lark!
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
Wow! So glad you are feeling better every day. This is a lovely poem to help aid you in your journey to getting completely well. I love that you mention you will soon walk in the park and search for a lark!
Comment Written 15-May-2018
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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Thanks for the comments.
Comment from mermaids
It is so wonderful to be reading about fairies. I hope your recovery is going well. You take the reader to a pleasant place with your words. "Marvel that again the muse can sing" is a line that makes the reader feel good. Glad you are back.
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
It is so wonderful to be reading about fairies. I hope your recovery is going well. You take the reader to a pleasant place with your words. "Marvel that again the muse can sing" is a line that makes the reader feel good. Glad you are back.
Comment Written 15-May-2018
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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Thanks for the comments. Thanks for the six stars.