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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks teacher Mrs. Marsden said challengingly that Phillip copied answers and it was evident; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
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This speaks teacher Mrs. Marsden said challengingly that Phillip copied answers and it was evident; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 11-May-2018
Comment from jenintorre
This is a great little dialogue only story. I really enjoyed reading it and just loved the punch line. Very unexpected. Well done. I wish you good luck in the competition. Take care. Jen.
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This is a great little dialogue only story. I really enjoyed reading it and just loved the punch line. Very unexpected. Well done. I wish you good luck in the competition. Take care. Jen.
Comment Written 11-May-2018
Comment from giraffmang
IS, one chance in a zillion;
that that could be a coincidence - no real need for the semi-colon here.
You need insert closing speech marks at the very end.
Up until the end I was remembering an incident in school where I was accused of cheating, because the other lad was very studious. He had in fact copied me but the teacher would have none of it. lol
Nice little piece.
GMG
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IS, one chance in a zillion;
that that could be a coincidence - no real need for the semi-colon here.
You need insert closing speech marks at the very end.
Up until the end I was remembering an incident in school where I was accused of cheating, because the other lad was very studious. He had in fact copied me but the teacher would have none of it. lol
Nice little piece.
GMG
Comment Written 11-May-2018