Comment from Susan B. Lamphier

Excellent

Christine--I have you have an easy winter. I am glad your autumn is beautiful and warm, and you write with such joy as you live through it. I have some quibbles about some of the words used, mostly using the plural (red and tree in stanza 1, for example). I also fear some of your rhymes were a bit forced. Overall, your delicious feelings of a warm autumn shine through. Nicely done!

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018

Hi Susan, Thank you and yes I suppose at times my meter could improve and ai have fixed the pleural thanks for picking this up. Our Autumn is exceptionally lovely this year. Many Cheers Christine

Comment from aryr

Excellent

Your words create such a beautiful picture, Christine. You presented it in such a colorful way, that it would indeed be hard not to enjoy it. It has a wonderful flow and an excellent rhyme pattern. I really appreciate your notations because they reminded me that seasons there are different from our seasons. The poem portrayed beauty, relaxing and enjoying. Very well done, thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018

Hi Ary, thank you so mich and yes our Autumn is still lovely so I have some days off and looking forwardcto enjoy the warmth but I still have to write as I am a little behind and need to catch up Cheers Christine

reply by aryr on 24-Apr-2018

You are so welcome, Christine. I tend to like all the seasons for their own reason.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I have falling be hind again You have captured my attention from the start.
Thank you for this lovely poem
Your words were as sweet as a honey dew.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018

Hi Cookie. You've fallen behind No I have Ha ha trying to catch up Thanks for your review Yes we are having a lovely autumn this year in Australia Cheers Christine

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

autumn in Australia sounds pretty. our weather here is so screwy here I don't even know what season it is, or even what time it is. thankyou for a very nice read.........meeshu

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018

Hi meeshu, Ha ha sometimes I don't either Thanks for your review it made me smile Cheers Christine

Comment from Harry Smith

Excellent

I like the picture selection. The poem is full of imagery and the reader really enjoyed the read. I really like the poets writing.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018

Hi Harry, I am pleased you enjoyed this also Thanks for reading and sending me feedback Have a lovey day Cheers Christine